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Re: Twisted Fate
Hello, KaeRae! I'm Wist here to leave you with a review. I want to start by saying that this piece does an excellent job building an atmosphere. I'll go into ...
Jun 2, 2024 -
Re: The Meet Cute: Behind The Scenes Edition Part Two
Hello, Kate! Wist is finally here to review part two. This is a nice sequel to part one, but I will say this part felt much more exposition-heavy than the ...
Jun 2, 2024 -
Re: The Meet Cute: Behind The Scenes Edition Part One
Hello, Kate! Wist here for a review. You already know I'm deeply invested in these characters, so I'm here to see where this journey takes them! This short story is ...
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Re: The UNO Reverse
Hello, Stranger! I'm Wist here to leave a review for your poem. I want to start by saying that I adore when poets try to find poetry in the unpoetic, ...
May 29, 2024 -
Re: Jazzlyn Diaz’s greatest desires
Hey, vampricone! Wist is back for the sequel. This story is quite the follow-up to your first work. There's a good use of foreshadowing and payoff in this story. With ...
Mar 2, 2024 -
Re: Jazzlyn Diaz’s supernatural secret
Hello, vampricone! Wist back again to review another one of your works. This story is morbid, gruesome, and everything I have come to expect from your writing. However, it's written ...
Mar 2, 2024 -
Re: Broken With Brutality
Hello, Ellie! Wist here with a review. I am so excited to review something from you. This poem demonstrates a powerful feeling that hit me straight in the feels. The ...
Mar 2, 2024 -
Re: Broken With Brutality
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Mar 2, 2024 -
Re: MIDNIGHT IN ALASKA
Hello, Felix! This is Wist here with a review. First, I want to welcome you to the site. We're glad to have you! Let me start by saying that this ...
Mar 2, 2024 -
Re: Teresa Jenkins-Circus of Horrors
Hello, Vampricone! Wist here with a review. I semi-recently reviewed one of your other works and am excited to see how the story develops. This story is fascinating, with a ...
Mar 2, 2024 -
Re: Jesus Christ
Hello, Mint! Wist here with a review. ^^ This poem represents quite an interesting take on the tale of Jesus Christ and his sacrifice for humanity's salvation. The poem's meaning ...
Mar 2, 2024 -
Re: A Valentine’s Day heart
Hello, Vampricone! Wist here with a short review. This cute story turns Hell's grimness into the perfect backdrop for a heartwarming story. Your characterization is thorough, emphasizing less than ple
Feb 4, 2024 -
Re: Introducing.... Antares
Hello, AJW! This is Wist dropping in for a quick review. Antares is an exciting character idea, as characters with ties to Greek mythology have plenty of potential. I hope ...
Feb 4, 2024 -
Re: Among the Dragons - Chapter 1.1
Hello, Shady! You listened to my pleas to spam me so I’m here!!! Let’s get started. :] As a quick note, I have not read the previous story so I’m ...
Dec 18, 2022 -
Re: Sunny and the Syntax Errors of Doom: Chapter 1.1
Hello, Mint! I promised I'd do this, so here I am. XD I adore this little introductory chapter that you’ve written here. You’ve managed to create a relatable main character ...
Sep 9, 2022
