Way2Dawn

The imagery in this is phenomenal. Almost makes me want to wake up early in the morning and watch the sun rise above the morning dawn, but who am I ...

This was an amazing piece of art and had me hooked from the very first sentence. The main character's resistance of a Christian life, a dying loved one, and a ...

This feels like a great addition to your story. You did a fine job further describing and developing the two characters and their feelings for each other that are beginning ...

The emotion in your writing is something to be admired. Emotional writing is the best way to write I believe so on that I tip my hat to you. However, ...

Another great poem AkiKerosin! The emotion is quite present and none stop through out the work its an amazing way to write. God works in mysterious so if you are ...

Another fine write Princess. I think you did a good job further drawing my attention into the young couples sadly its seems to perfect and a bit cliche, yet as ...

This was a good beginning to a more possibly engaging story. You did a fine job introducing the characters and going into the right amount of detail in the main ...

Your emotion is strong in this piece of work (no scratch that) in this piece of art. You describe innocence as motivation without the ties of reality. Though I might ...

The emotion and truth in this piece is quite present though out the entire passage. A bit dark and a undesirable, yet undeniable ending puts the icing on the cake! ...

Hmmm interesting poem to say the least. It was a bit too short for my taste but the message was clear enough in its own respect. Tell your friend he/she ...

Hey Nayex I thought this was a great poem a bit dark, but was balanced with hope for the future. I wonder if this is based off a past break-up ...

This my first time reading lyrics from this site and I must so I am not disappointed. Its was deep and a bit dark in its own light but the ...

Let me start off my saying that I'm sorry for your loss, and I admire to see that you are able to write a piece in her memory. I could ...

Very true and emotional I love it! Great job writing on a deep subject that many people overlook. As a review the flow was a bit rocky but stayed the ...

Very emotional and true work which, sadly enough, has an inevitable ending. I wonder if this is from a past experience and if it is I'm truly sorry. There are ...