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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: I walked

    I’m in complete awe, it doesn’t help that i was listening to some very deep contemporary composers. Honestly it’s so good I feel so much in this it’s so beautiful ...

    Feb 13, 2021
  • Article / Essay » Romantic, Realistic Re: To All the Boys Who Never Texted Me Back: P.S. I Still Hate You

    this is me right now, I ended up crushing hard which suck because the guy never responds and by the end of this I ended up actually crying because this ...

    Mar 28, 2020
  • Art » Teen Fiction, Health Re: Toothpaste

    I FEEL THIS ALL THE TIME BUT IVE NEVER SEEN ANYTHING WRITTEN ABOUT IT!!!!! this is really amazing I think her story is very relatable to most introverts and people ...

    Mar 28, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: No More Noises

    I think this is really good. I really hope this is actually hinting at a deeper meaning, I don’t quite know past the point of “I don’t really want to ...

    Mar 27, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Gone

    this really hits close to home to me even though I don't have an experience like this. I think this is amazing and very well set up almost like a ...

    Mar 27, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: The Words Come Back To Bite

    Oooh I really like how simple this is but gives great meaning and sassiness. i think it’s a perfect little poem that represents regret and karma really well. The end ...

    Feb 29, 2020
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: On The Beach

    I think this is fantastic, it reminds me a lot of Frankenstein by Mary Shelly in how the character from Frankenstein and the character from your poem both long for ...

    Feb 29, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Four poems about time

    remembrance of things past; I think it does an incredible job on reflecting on death physically or even theoretically. I took it as theoretical, as for a broken relationship. I ...

    Feb 29, 2020


I write because I don't know what I think until I read what I say.
— Flannery O'Connor