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  • Poetry » Satire, Dramatic Re: Prisoner of the Heart

    Okay, this is actually very clever and devious. First off, I'd like to say hi. Second, I saw this in the green room even though it had like, 5 comments, ...

    Jul 28, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Its Raining Again

    Hello Awru, I hope everything's going well for you. I saw this poem and thought maybe I'd try reviewing poetry. I'm not that good because poetry is very mysterious to ...

    Jul 27, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Den of Thieves Chapters 1 and 2

    Hello, Cherrymary and belated welcome to YWS! I hope everything's alright. I just wanted to drop in on this story and see what it what about. First impressions with this ...

    Jul 27, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Quest for Fire - Frozen Past - Chapter Twenty One

    Hello, felistia, decided I'd drop a review right about now. Since the beginning, this novel is very interesting, and to now have the answer to end the war? Of course ...

    Jul 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A Fleeting Eternity - Chapter Eighteen

    Hello ShadowViper, I saw this in the green room and remembered that I reviewed the last part, so why not get two reviews? Hopefully this is beneficial to you. And ...

    Jul 25, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A Fleeting Eternity - Chapter Seventeen

    Hello there, ShadowViper, I'm here to review your story. And because I haven't read the first parts, please ignore if I say something that has already happened in the story ...

    Jul 25, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Night Witch - Chapter 1: Natalya (May 1931)

    Hello, Ghost_Pianist. I saw your work in the green room and thought I'd go check it out. Let me tell you, this amazed me. I like the setting, the current ...

    Jul 25, 2020
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Beyond Space and Time

    Hello there, fellow writer. This short story's title caught my interest like the black man's pendant caught the three girls, so I went ahead and checked it out. Just as ...

    Jul 24, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Outlaw for Hire: Chapter 4

    Hello, brotherGeo. I'd like to say this is an interesting story, though I haven't gotten to the first parts since I was looking around and found this one first. And ...

    Jul 24, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Quest for Fire - Frozen Past - Chapter Fifteen

    Hello, felistia! Hope you're having a good day! I am one day late, but is that a lot? I hope not. Anyways, you know the drill. Grammar and maybe some ...

    Jun 16, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Quest for Fire - Frozen Past - Chapter Fourteen

    Hello, felistia! It's nice reviewing your work again, mostly because the other stories don't interest me. There are a few, but I should get reviewing. Okay, like I mentioned previously ...

    Jun 13, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Quest for Fire - Frozen Past - Chapter Thirteen

    Hello, felistia! I myself noticed that I kept coming back to review your work. I try finding anything that interests me enough to leave a review. There is a lot ...

    Jun 12, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Quest for Fire - Frozen Past - Chapter Twelve

    Hello, felistia! If you don't mind I will leave my review here. Since I am more of a grammar police, I will try and get the most accurate readings on ...

    Jun 11, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Horror Re: BISON - CH. 01.2 (2,600 wrds)

    [BEWARE; very long; haha]Hello, Bullet! If you don't mind I will leave this review for you to see. Most of these will be grammar errors, others so insignificant you would ...

    Jun 11, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Historical Fiction Re: How Do You Plead: 10.4

    Greetings, CaptainJack, I am here to review(I'm not sure why I keep saying that if you already know; probably 'cause I need an intro). bare in mind plot twists, character ...

    Jun 10, 2020


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