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Thanks for the review! I'll think about formatting for the next thing I write for sure. As for the making it more original, this was based off of every single ...

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This poem touches on the serious issue of bullying and I can definitely relate, so thank you for writing this. You poured a lot of emotion into this and it ...

I'm very intrigued! You created a main character that is relatable and complex. Along with that you added a mysterious roadblock in her life that drew me in right away. ...

Haha thanks. Those spelling errors kind of take away from the story, I'll go fix them. Thank you.

Thank you! I'll definitely use your advice. :)

Thanks!

Thanks! I agree, I needed to find a better way to separate the flashback from the rest of the story. Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review! I never realized that I was spelling upon incorrectly, so thanks for that! And I realized later that I spelled Tumblr wrong. I was typing this ...

I really liked this poem. The use of repetition is a great technique in poems, and really enforces the importance of your message: do we really know ourselves, or anybody? ...

I loved this. It's nice to see a strong female character not letting herself be pushed into doing what somebody wants her to do. Women need to know that they ...