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Re: What did we do Wrong ~ A Bullying Awareness Poem
This poem touches on the serious issue of bullying and I can definitely relate, so thank you for writing this. You poured a lot of emotion into this and it ...
Nov 12, 2016 -
Re: Can't Rise
This is a very powerful piece of writing that I think could really impact others who have dealt with physical abuse as well as people like me who haven't had ...
Oct 30, 2016 -
Re: The Fall
This poem is a great example of the power of few words. You brought so much thought and feeling through in this short piece, and I love it. I truly ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: The True Monster
This story was interesting and I really like the idea of a female knight. It's a rather unique idea. However, the story had a couple grammar flaws and I have ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: In one hour
I absolutely loved this. It is an intriguing story that draws the reader in. However, I wish that I knew why exactly this event happened to her and if her ...
Jun 10, 2016 -
Re: Rocks
This poem is a good example of somebody looking at the simple things in life and showing how important they truly can be. Look at the beauty in life and ...
Jun 10, 2016 -
Re: A happier life
I know how you feel about not being comfortable around others and feeling like a third wheel. When I was younger, I had a group of friends that all seemed ...
Jun 10, 2016 -
Re: Lies and Deceit- Chapter 1 *Edited*
I loved this. It's nice to see a strong female character not letting herself be pushed into doing what somebody wants her to do. Women need to know that they ...
Jun 10, 2016
