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  • Article / Essay » Other, Technology Re: Your Phone Company is Watching Essay

    Hello. Here for a review! The topic of the essay was interesting as was your title. I saw the structure you used which was the Problem-Evidence-Solution formula, and I found ...

    Apr 16, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Mystery / Suspense Re: Devils and Demons

    Hello! Here as requested. I will be commenting on the structure first before the overall story. Reading all the previous comments and the work itself, I've seen that you have ...

    Apr 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: Faith in Humanity = Non-existent

    Here for a review. I especially liked your ending because of how it was so negative all the way. Great intellectual lingo and references cited. There was a flare of ...

    Jan 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Your Eyes

    Hello :) Just passed by and say a few things! Firstly, I think it's good that you made a sad birthday poem. It really dripped with such emotion I could ...

    Dec 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Spiritual, General Re: Do Not Go Gentle - Part 2

    Here for a review :) Just like to say that this piece is one of my favorites here so far! :) I liked how realistic and well animated the narrator ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 3: An Unexpected Suprise

    Hello! Sybil here :> Just read this part of your work because the title got me reeled in. Sorry to be so frank at such an early part in this ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Jane Eyre Class Opinions

    Hey, Sybil here! :) I've read Jane Eyre, so yes I understand this to review it :P. First it was a good one. You've exhibited a good paced analysis and ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Where the Story Ends: Prologue

    Just passed by! ;) Man, I liked this one! The story's really thrilling and it kept...spinning somehow. Spinning in a good way! It was exciting and your writing was vivid. ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural Re: The college with no doors.

    Hey Sybil here to say a few things :) On the story: it was intriguing as you wished. It had a cute beginning to it, somehow. It was good that ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Short Story » Literature, General Re: Via Vitæ

    Hey! Sybil here to say a few things There was something in your title that attracted me so. 'The Way of Life,' is it? In English? (I haven't studied Latin ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Rebellion

    Hey, Sybil here to share a thought. This short was nice and actually intriguing with the plot line. I liked how its just going on and on with a particular ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Jane Eyre Analysis

    Hey, Sybil here! ;) I've read Jane Eyre and I could say that you've done a great job in this analysis! There were references form the book, great. You've successfully ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Script » Film, Dramatic Re: Moment of Nostalgia

    Hey Sybil here! :) Just want to say a few things here and there. First off, this was a fairly good one. The title was well chosen for the piece. ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: Complications

    Hello, this is Sybil to leave you a review or so... :) First, I just really loved it! I sensed the emotion of your piece, the sort of melancholy bitter ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Lucy

    Hey! Sybil here! ;) I DEMAND for a 'love button!' I love this piece! It was so beautiful! Perfectly soul-ripping with such sweetness and melancholy. It was flawless and heartfelt, ...

    Dec 28, 2014


Life, although it may only be an accumulation of anguish, is dear to me, and I will defend it.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein