WallFlower

Thank you so much for the review! The reason I chose to be so simplistic with "died" is because my MC is finally choosing to call it what it is ...

And... WELCOME TO YWS!!!! *throws confetti*

Thanks for the review! I have no idea which order is technically right, I just went with whatever sounded right to me.

Wow, thanks so much!!

Haha I understand. We all do it sometimes ;) *whispers* ...even me...

Thanks so much!

Thanks!!

Thanks for the review!! I had to look up what a vignette was :P So yes, I guess this would be a vignette of sorts. I'm hoping to write more ...

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Thanks so much for the review! I am hoping to continue the story. I meant this as more of a prologue than a chapter, which is part of the reason ...

Thanks :) I'll fix the mistakes. To explain all the fragments, I don't always write in that style, I just did it purposely this time because his thoughts are fragmented. ...

They're both really good, so I think anything you do to them will be fine :)

I always LOVE the way you describe things, and I wasn't disappointed :) I only had two TINY nitpicks. 1) I think the third line would flow easier if it ...

Hi there :) First of all, I really like this. I can completely relate to the feelings in this. It's beautifully written. Little tiny nitpick... While I sit waiting, hoping ...

Thanks so much! When I posted this I was still trying to get used to the formatting, and I just recently learned the whole Shift Enter thing :P