WaitingForLife

Heya, thanks for the request! You can write. The expressions you use, the vocabulary you use, it all fits in and gives this piece a prose-like quality that is an ...

Heya. And wow. This is probably the most well written work I've ever read on this site. You have a distinct style that suits the haunted, bitter atmosphere you've established ...

Heya! My most humble apologies for taking so long to get to this, but here we are. I'd like to point out that I won't be reading the earlier reviews, ...

Heya, thanks for the request. I'll start off by saying I found this an extremely impressive read. The problem people usually have when writing in this fashion (events that happen ...

Hmm... Well. The thing I do know is she's diving into a pool and then swimming laps. As for it[/], the obvious answer would be water, but I don't think ...

Cool. Heya, not much of a review this, I'm afraid. So much emotion in such a small piece. I really like your descriptions; they're vivid and tangible, especially like what ...

Heya! I'm not too big on poetry reviews, but I had to swing by and say that I thoroughly enjoyed this. I could see the scenes in my head vividly, ...

Heya! Lots of new faces around here nowadays, cool to see. Welcome to YWS! I hope you find your stay satisfying. Alrighty, on to the review. A find this to ...

Heya! This really hits home as an inspirational example. I like how you used such a powerful event and turned it into a personal lesson, daring yourself to overcoming your ...

Heya! First things first, cause they are, ah, first... Ahem. Welcome to the site. I hope you find your stay useful. :) Some people like to use their thesauruses. When ...

Heya! I don't know if you intended this to be interpreted as religious, but that's what springs to my mind. Maybe I'm over-analyzing and you meant only to display narrow-mindedness, ...

Howdy-ho! Allow me to blast you away with a review. First thing I noticed once I got hooked to this is that you have a great vocabulary. Just thought I'd ...

Heya! I liked the abstract atmosphere of this text. The mystery is nice, when you only hint at what you're getting at. What I get in my mind isn't clear ...

Heya! That sure was a refreshing read. When I was a little boy, I watched Peter Pan over and over, it being one of my favorite movies. Now that I ...

Howdy ho, good afternoon, morning and night! Whichever one applies. ;) You can write. Was the first thing that came to mind when I read this. I like your MC's ...