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Re: Short, Fat & Fabulous
YOYO! Waddlerz here on review day! ...Okay, you got me: I'm ACTUALLY reviewing this because I can relate to the title! :D The first paragraph was all in all hilarious, ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: Chapter One: A Main Protagonist’s Introduction
Helloooo, I'm WADDLERZ! I review stuff from top to bottom, so yus! :D At first, the beginning paragraph strikes me as slightly immature sounding/written, especially for a 16+ rated chapter. ...
Mar 29, 2016 -
Re: Patch and Petals
Heya FeatherPen! I CANNOT BELIEVE that I'm FINALLY reviewing something of yours!!! :D Okeedokee; when I read this the first time around, there are two things that i immediately recognise: ...
Mar 29, 2016 -
Re: Inescapable Time
Hayo! I saw that this had no reviews and I was like "I anaylse poetry in English, so this should be okay!" Let's see if it is! "SecondS Stealing my ...
Mar 25, 2016 -
Re: The Heart of Silver Gold: Chapter Five
HEYA BUDDYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!! "Thanks to my lovely friend @Waddlers for drawing this beautiful picture of Piper for me!!! I still can't thank you enough!" This is going to be a very ...
Feb 19, 2016 -
Re: Murder Inn
Hello! I'm Waddlers and I'm gonna be reviewing this incredible snippet of greatness!!! First of all, the atmosphere in this is fantastic! I felt creeped out near the beginning! And ...
Jan 28, 2016 -
Re: Beyond -- Chapter 1
Heya, I'm Waddlers! And Immuna review this chapter from top to bottom, so let's begin! The first two paragraphs set the scene well, giving a simple description of what's around; ...
Jan 11, 2016 -
Re: New Haven: Chapter 3: Ellington Academy
Hey! I'm back (back again, shady's back. Tell a friend. Guess who's back, ect.) First of all, I'm flattered by the mention in that Merry Christmas post!! ^U^ Second of ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: New Haven: Chapter 2: The Train of Memories
Hey!!! Here to review your update!!! So her name is Eloise!!! :D Coool! If that is the same girl. Hopefully we will find out!!! ^U^ Very well opened - her ...
Dec 15, 2015 -
Re: New Haven: Chapter 1: Waves
Hey, MadWriter7! My review is gonna be going through it bit by bit, pointing out little things I think work well and things I think need to be altered to ...
Dec 14, 2015 -
Re: i may wander
Hello! I'm here reviewing this! I'm Waddlers! First thing I notice is the lack of capital letters. Shame on you! D:< Just kidding, but still, CAPITALS!!! They are very important! ...
Dec 5, 2015 -
Re: The Heart of Silver Gold: Chapter Four
WOOP, WOOP! It's me!!! Waddlers!!! Immuna review dis AMAZING chapter now!!! (YAY, FINALLY!!!) Just to start, I'm wondering if you'd like me to draw your characters out for you so ...
Aug 19, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 1, The Name Game
Hey, I'm Waddlers, and I'm gonna be reviewing this!!! :D Here we go!!! ... ................AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! WHAT A PROLOGUE!!! This was amazing!!! The detail i
Jul 8, 2015 -
Re: Moh: 1
Hey, Satira!!! (Nice name! ^U^) I'm gonna review this story from now on, I've decided!!! I'll follow it from beginning to end!! Here we go!!! First of all, I REALLY ...
Jul 7, 2015 -
Re: The Heart of Silver Gold: Chapter Three
Hey again!!! I'm gunna be reviewing and reading ALL of this story, so I think you'd better get used to me!! XD 1) "What if I can fly?" - I ...
Jul 6, 2015
