WRITINGNEON

I like it, but too tell you the truth I don't love it, it is open and deep and I like that about it. I don't like how you say ...

03, 2011 4:27 am Chapter 2 - Friends “You’re late!” yelled a cold voice as I skated through the metal gates of the small park close to the Westchester Bluffs. ...

This is really good! you are an exceptianal poet. The only mistake i have found in this wonderfull poem is you wrote son instead of song, but thats just a ...

Fear, a horrible thing. Just the feeling of it stings. Haunting thoughts linger, Attempts to forget are hindered. THIS IS AWESOME but the last part doesnt flow, it rymes just ...

Maybe it’s time for me to let go, Take a step, Trust my own feet, And believe that You’ll catch me if I fall. Maybe I need to forget what ...

Don't ever say never. Hope is forever. Let the river sweep past, all wide and vast, in the morning sun, rising on a reprieve and misery dies on a new ...

This is very good! i see no pont in telling you any constructive critisam when there is none needed! your wroks are perfect! thums up! i like travises perspective on ...

Thats intence! you dont have any grammer problems so thumbs up on that perspective. I try to help writers inprove but there is no constructive critisisam needed here you poem ...

It is very good! The only problem is grammer. But it flows together very fluently and is amazing work! I think you have talent. Try writitng your works onto microsoft ...

That is an amazing poem, it tells a story and keeps you interested. I am trully facinated with it! There is only one specific problem in which you share with ...

That was amazing work! It is dramatic, intence, the only problem i have found is rhyme. Dont get me wrong it is very good just doesnt completly fit together. But ...

Exceptional work! it shows deep emotion within words, it tells a story and it captures you! This is amazing work! i only wish that i could write as good as ...