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I agree with MeanMrMustard and BehindTheMask here. The rhymes are forced, the spoilers are damn unnecissary (excuse my french) and the viewpoint is notonly offensivly controversial but moot point. Who

hehe, this is very interesting. i like how you incorporated 'The site is blue, and never tacky." at first i thought you said the sky is blue, but reading it ...

This is a good piece, don't get me wrong. But I have to say that it's absurd to me. I mean, I spent 12 years believing in god. I spent ...

This sounds more like a tragedy. It is a very cliche topic, though the way you set it up is very unique. Yo are very descriptive, but in these descriptionsyou ...

Love song? This is a twisted love STORY. But hey, i thought it was good. A little confusing at times but those parts sound like personal refrences. I saw the ...

The ponly thing that bothered me was juliet. I mean, the entire thing is a letter to her parents about how she fell in love and pretended to die then ...

This is awesome sauce. Okay, in the begining, when you say the key twice, I think some punctuation of some sort needs to he put there to further separate them. ...

"I want it to never end" not the greatest wording there. It is off. But that is the absolute only nitpick I have. You know at thirteen I still have ...

*laughs* *rereads* *laughs again* oh, anime, that is the most hilarious, clever, brilliantly wordef piece I have read in. aLOOONNNGGG time. Really you puled this off so smoothly I'm suprised ...

Raven's dad is a DEMON?!?! SATAN, no less! W. O. W. I just saw where you got this from, and just let me sy yours superbly rocks over that. Love ...

Funkymomo: personification. Thats the word you were looking for. Kay. Lets get down to buisness. Stanza one:good. Nice way to open up the poem. I particularly liked how the rhyming ...

One thing you have taught me is to always heed rating warnings. But hey, im not being all bitchy about it. Im cooler than that. :) ok. Lets get down ...

Well done!!!!! My favote part is the last four lines. I made a poem kinda like this only it wasnt a letter. This actually reminds me of a site. Dearblankpleaseblank.com. ...

Okay, before I start, remember that this poem is actually really awesome. Im just breaking it down. My best friend is always there for me/ good opening so far... She ...