Vivian

WTF, I was really expecting a poem. ;-) Lol though.

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Wow, I have to say I was not expecting that. The first paragraph made me think she just couldn't leave her house, now you've left me wondering why she was ...

Thanks. I see a way I can change this.

Thank you, I'll change what needs to be changed.

Ah, I'll fix that.

Lol, are you serious?

Somehow, this poem doesn't seem finished. I feel like I was just given a half a story or a cliffhanger. It's just that last line, it makes me feel like ...

Kay, you're welcome.

So what was on the paper? As creepy and cool as this story was I still feel the need to find out the answer to the necrophiliac's question. :) Good ...

It's great for a first poem, you should try poetry more.

That was mean. ;)

Thanks

Thank you, I'm glad my wrds could make you change your mind.

Thanks

I feel your pain girl. There will always be people who just don't understand. Nice poem by the way, I love it.