Vivian

Thanks, this is a great review. I'll work on what you said and since I believe I wrote this a little after reading the Fault in Our Stars, maybe. I ...

I agree with Wanderlustgirl this is a motivational poem. It talks about how those few really feel and the lies they tell to hide it. I can relate to this ...

Thanks.

Hey Fortis, great poem. You kept up the smooth flow from the previous parts and continued rhyming. But I have one nitpick. That last line "to give my this unsightly... ...

I'm done :D Just wonderful.

Hey Dog, like the poem and the title. It does have a musical flow to it, soft a bit monotone maybe. I saw one spelling mistake, the "Witch always seems ...

Thank you.

Hey Dream the poem is great and I only have one mistake to point out. "mashed up words pulled though a potato peeler", the "though" should be "through". Now for ...

Since I think jessiethought got everything I just want to say the end makes perfect sense.

I love the poem, it has a nice flow, it sounds solemn. But I'm a little confused to whether the narrator thinks this is a good thing or a bad ...

Your sister gives some great inspirations.

Don't try, it's perfect this way. ;)

Hey, Viv here. Beautiful poem, I get your point and I'm not one to fear death either. You only have one mistake, as far as I can see, The "it" ...

Great, thanks Royal.

Thanks Chippy, will do.