Vivian

Wow, this is one of my favorite Tim Burton movies too despite the fact I didn't see the Corpse Bride from the beginning. I don't see much wrong with this ...

Hey, Viv here. At first I thought the narrator was saying she didn't love this person, or that she was losing love for this person. But I like your description ...

Okay, I get that one of these characters is a girl and that she's in an asylum of sorts. But I do not get where the war fits in and ...

Fortis, I had a very hard time reading this, you have some awesome ideas. I know this won't tun into a proper review but I'm going to call it that ...

I'm not going to get into punctuation errors. But you have one spelling mistake. The "twenty-our hour" in the last line, third stanza should be "twenty-four hour." Other than that ...

Hey Happy, I understand you're talking about God in this poem and I think it's great. The poem has a nice flow but you have a few mistakes. For line ...

I see one mistake. "You don't want yo be associated with me." The "yo" should be "to" but other than that the poem is fine. Bechtel was right, you describe ...

First of all, Love the title. Secondly, wow! I was not expecting that. I literally started crying while reading this, and I just have to say, your story is great. ...

This is a great poem there is just one mistake. I think "they", should either be "the" or "their". Other than that it's perfect. I see this poem as a ...

Let's start off with this. I am not a Youtuber, so I have no idea who half these people are, so I'll try my best. Firstly, you shouldn't say that ...

They put him in a room with no windows to break, I think that was more dangerous. I love this poem because it tells a bit more of a story, ...

Hey Secrete, Viv here. First off, I just want to say it's a great poem and I loved it. It describes several broken lives, but still shows their optimism in ...

Wow. Will this be a novel anytime soon? Or is it just a short? It's a good story, I like it, and I like how she describes herself as a ...

Hi, Vivian here. This is wonderfully romantic, and sad. I lovethe story and how you depict the main characters final moments and what's going through her mind. It's a sweet ...

She really does act like a child. ^V^ Hey Viv here, I've don't got much to say, but I like it. As far as I can remember you have one ...