Virgil

thanks for the review.

I didn't really find any other point in the story than to show "oh i also think marriage should be between a man and a woman." im sorry if i ...

Just a note: Calling something beautiful doesn't make it beautiful. Writing itself makes it beautiful. *hops out*

It's not polished and thanks for the review! xD

Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review and I'm glad that I inspired you :'D

No one's commented but now I have to ruin it and say this is so beautiful and amazing and I love it and it's so good and I just took ...

It's a collection of things and bits and pieces of my thoughts and things happening in my own life and it probably is quite difficult to understand. It was meant ...

If it was depressing it was probably meant to be depressing.

I just want to say that this wasn't really an actual review though you called it one because it has nothing to actually critique on the work and it's more ...

Er, I'm pretty sure some classic poetry has also gone without punctuation and you're just being close-minded and refuse to realize that you're wrong and that poetry can be without ...

Yeah. There were a lot of commas on accident xD

Thanks for the review! And yeah, those were typos xD

Thanks for the review! It was helpful :3

I wasn't fully saying "You stole this!" I just said it was very similar and it might cause confusion to the readers with the names being so similar. I partially ...