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Re: It Hurts
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! So I'm always a fan of seeing the outcome of shorter poetry. There's less space to have weak points, which is ...
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Re: Heartbeat
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! So the standard 4x4, with four lines and four stanzas. Nothing wrong with that. I can see how you're playing around ...
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Re: the fury
If I were in your position, I'm pretty sure I would feel the same (I can't directly relate to your fury, but I'm still angry with you and I know ...
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Re: after the storm
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! So I'm a fan of the Poetic Line Generator here on the site, because it can definitely give some ideas for ...
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Re: The Boundless Serendipity of Juno Plating - Chapter 1.1
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! So I wanted to address the title before I went anywhere else with this. Right now, looking in as the perspective ...
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Re: 2 Cat Poems
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a quick review! Hmm. I'm always not a fan when I'm to write poetry for school, because whatever regulations I'm given, they're a ...
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Re: january 2017
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! While the first line is one that draws me in to the poem, I'm not sure of how effective it is ...
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Re: Arcane Prolouge
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! So it isn't often that I stumble across a chapter zero. I'm a little confused as to what this means, though, ...
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Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 2.1
Nikayla back again for another review! So I'm going to attempt obtaining a Hamlet tonight alongside a new star. We'll see how that goes. I have all of this to ...
Jun 6, 2017 -
Re: Jeans
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! So we've already met. That's been established. Once again, welcome to the site! I really do hope that you end up ...
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Re: What Words Can't Explain
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! So, since you reviewed a work of mine (an old one, but you understand the courtesy), I'll go ahead and review ...
Jun 6, 2017 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 1.2
And I'm back again! I'm glad that I'm on a bit of a roll today even though I've been taking breaks here and there. We ended off at a good ...
Jun 5, 2017 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 1.1
Boom. Guess who's back for another review? In which Edna Fisher is bored with bingo, becomes the Chosen One, and leaves her nursing home for better things. Before I started ...
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Re: Sabaism
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! So I can see how this poem is effective, but there's a lot that could use fleshing out. In the first ...
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Re: The Chosen Grandma, Prologuish Thing
There are a lot of comments and a lot of reviews here, so I'm just going to ignore them so I can act like what I end up saying about ...
Jun 5, 2017
