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  • Poetry » General, General Re: It Hurts

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! So I'm always a fan of seeing the outcome of shorter poetry. There's less space to have weak points, which is ...

    Jun 7, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Heartbeat

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! So the standard 4x4, with four lines and four stanzas. Nothing wrong with that. I can see how you're playing around ...

    Jun 7, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: the fury

    If I were in your position, I'm pretty sure I would feel the same (I can't directly relate to your fury, but I'm still angry with you and I know ...

    Jun 7, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: after the storm

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! So I'm a fan of the Poetic Line Generator here on the site, because it can definitely give some ideas for ...

    Jun 7, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: The Boundless Serendipity of Juno Plating - Chapter 1.1

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! So I wanted to address the title before I went anywhere else with this. Right now, looking in as the perspective ...

    Jun 6, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: 2 Cat Poems

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a quick review! Hmm. I'm always not a fan when I'm to write poetry for school, because whatever regulations I'm given, they're a ...

    Jun 6, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: january 2017

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! While the first line is one that draws me in to the poem, I'm not sure of how effective it is ...

    Jun 6, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Arcane Prolouge

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! So it isn't often that I stumble across a chapter zero. I'm a little confused as to what this means, though, ...

    Jun 6, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 2.1

    Nikayla back again for another review! So I'm going to attempt obtaining a Hamlet tonight alongside a new star. We'll see how that goes. I have all of this to ...

    Jun 6, 2017
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Narrative Re: Jeans

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! So we've already met. That's been established. Once again, welcome to the site! I really do hope that you end up ...

    Jun 6, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: What Words Can't Explain

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! So, since you reviewed a work of mine (an old one, but you understand the courtesy), I'll go ahead and review ...

    Jun 6, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 1.2

    And I'm back again! I'm glad that I'm on a bit of a roll today even though I've been taking breaks here and there. We ended off at a good ...

    Jun 5, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 1.1

    Boom. Guess who's back for another review? In which Edna Fisher is bored with bingo, becomes the Chosen One, and leaves her nursing home for better things. Before I started ...

    Jun 5, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Sabaism

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! So I can see how this poem is effective, but there's a lot that could use fleshing out. In the first ...

    Jun 5, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Prologuish Thing

    There are a lot of comments and a lot of reviews here, so I'm just going to ignore them so I can act like what I end up saying about ...

    Jun 5, 2017


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