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Virgil

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Ascension: Corso 21 (The Myriad book 1)

    Hi there Feltrix! I've reviewed a couple of chapters of Ascension before, so I thought I might come back to do it again on Review Day! With that, let's jump ...

    Jun 25, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Engulfed- Chapter Three

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review on Review Day! So I noticed that this chapter, and I assume the chapters before this are too, is pretty based ...

    Jun 25, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Unsafe ~ Chapter 8

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review on Review Day! So I'm going to have to agree with BlueAfrica that while I can enjoy straight-up dialogue that takes ...

    Jun 25, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Moon Needs Her Night Chapter 3

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review on Review Day! So I noticed that you've been mentioning that this hasn't gotten out of the Green Room yet, so ...

    Jun 25, 2017
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: Occitanie - Brief recollection

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review on Review Day! I'm giggling because the whole time I've been reading the title as 'brief collection' which is originally why ...

    Jun 25, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Narrative, General Re: Thoughts On Relationships That Emerged After Selling a Fidget Spinner

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review on Review Day! So I can see why this is still in the Green Room right now. It's an essay that's ...

    Jun 25, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: To PenguinAttack

    So I totally get why this has one review, Fortis, and I'll try and be as competent as the last one because this poem deserves it. With that, this is ...

    Jun 25, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: The Cry of a Child

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review on Review Day! The first aspect of this poem that I noticed to be a little odd is the overall aesthetic. ...

    Jun 25, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Bridges

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review on Review Day! So I'm not going to be focusing on the overall aesthetic of the work, or how it looks ...

    Jun 25, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Everlasting Sun: Happy birthday, Kendall! (Poem about my Best Friend)

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review on Review Day! So I noticed that the text is a little big here. I don't have a problem with that ...

    Jun 25, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Pink Ribboned Cage

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review on Review Day!So I see that you're new to the site! Welcome! Hope you enjoy it here. That's not why I'm ...

    Jun 25, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: the settler and the skeletons

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review. While I admit that this isn't the best work you've done, there's a particular rhythm here that drew me in. At ...

    Jun 25, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Sleepless Nights

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review on Review Day! Let's jump right into this, Essenceria, with a point of confusion of mine that I have with the ...

    Jun 25, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: An Ten (June 8th)

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! The first aspect that I noticed about this poem that I noticed is that the beginning of each line is capitalized. ...

    Jun 25, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Forgive Me

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! The first aspect of this poem that I wanted to touch on is the fact that almost every line is capitalized. ...

    Jun 25, 2017


Revision is one of the exquisite pleasures of writing.
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