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Virgil

  • Other » Fantasy, Other Re: Gray

    Nikayla here dropping in for a review as requested. I'm a little confused as to what this is! That's the first issue that I have here. I have no problem ...

    Jul 26, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: Me, Myself, and I Ch. 1

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review as requested. I'm a little frustrated because previously this review actually happened to be done before I went and took a ...

    Jul 25, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: Tree on her back

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! I assume that this is what you requested a review on and even though there's only one portfolio, I wondered if ...

    Jul 25, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Action / Adventure Re: Twisted Tokyo Trip

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! The alliteration in the title intrigued me, so I may as well jump right in and give thoughts on this. I ...

    Jul 24, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Until the Stars Go Out (1)

    Hiya there Regismare! Nikayla here dropping in for a review, as requested. I have to say that this plays to its strengths, especially with the tense that this is written ...

    Jul 24, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: (so don’t lose me, follow me home) : 2/4

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! I may as well follow the rest of this short story seeing as I want to know where this goes and ...

    Jul 24, 2017
  • Other » General, General Re: the past

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! I have to stay that I'm a little unsure as to what this is. A prose poem? A thought without a ...

    Jul 23, 2017
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: Stranger

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review. Welcome to YWS, luhman! If you ever have any questions, don't be afraid to ask me or any other names in ...

    Jul 23, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: Devoid: Chapter 1.1

    Hi there TheFreakFantastic! This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review. First of all, welcome to YWS! If you ever have any questions, don't be afraid to ask me ...

    Jul 23, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: for so long

    Hi there Button! Nikayla here dropping in for a review. No need for a long introduction, so without further ado, let's jump right in. The first stanza is a little ...

    Jul 22, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Breaking

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! Haven't seen your poetry around for awhile, though I'm glad to see that you're back. Without further ado, let's jump right ...

    Jul 21, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Action / Adventure Re: It's too late now, Hazel Brown

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! First of all, Hazel Brown is a name based off of two colours. I'm a little perplexed by this on how ...

    Jul 21, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Chloe's Poem

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review. I first wanted to note that the last line in the poem ends with a comma for some odd reason. Change ...

    Jul 20, 2017
  • Poetry » Supernatural, Other Re: Supernova

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! I believe I've reviewed a bit of your poetry before, though the concept of a supernova is new grounds as far ...

    Jul 20, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: If I could

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! I believe that I've reviewed one of these group poems before, though by a couple different people. That being said, I'm ...

    Jul 20, 2017


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