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  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Where the River Flows

    hi, Just to let you know I really liked your poem. I find it easy to relate to, as I think all of us at one point in our lives ...

    Sep 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Politics, Spiritual Re: Ray Of Hope

    Hi there, I really like your poem. Although it is more like a speech, it is powerful. The words and imagery you used are brilliant. I can tell you are ...

    Sep 22, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Good or Evil? (updated)

    I am not sure it is poetry but I actually really enjoyed reading it! It is one of those piece of writings that questions everything you have been taught from ...

    Nov 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Politics Re: Humanity

    Hi. I really liked your poem. I do think it is a good description of the human race in general. It is also straight to the point but at the ...

    Jul 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A collection to the appreciation of 'Bleach' (Tite Kubo)

    I have to say I'd never thought I'd find a poem about Bleach on this site :D First of all, congratulations, it is really really good especially the episode 19 ...

    Dec 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I Followed The Devil

    I thought this poem was amazing. It's well written and I can't find any faults. For some reason I really like the description: 'But there is a place away from ...

    Dec 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The last words she heard

    Hey! I think this poem is brilliant and I must admit, having read the previous version, the edited one makes a lot more sense. But for some reason, I can't ...

    Dec 12, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Change of Plans

    Hi, First thing: I really liked your story! It was great in every sense of the word and I especially like this Hat boy character. You portrayed him as this ...

    Dec 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Untitled

    I really liked your poem, it's so vivid and expresses the emotions felt by someone who self-harms very well. Personally i think it would be good if the title would ...

    Dec 12, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Raiden Storm: Universal Assassin

    Hello :D I have to say I really liked your story especially the prologue at the beginning, I think it was very well written. I just wished you described the ...

    Dec 12, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Sometimes Life is Ugly.

    Personally I loved it, probably because I can relate (i'm not sure if it's a literacy piece or it actually happened) to Karen. You also expressed the emotions brilliantly well ...

    Dec 12, 2011


i could be a morning person if morning happened around noon.
— Fern