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Re: if i were a color
ChocolateCello, You make a great deal about the color blue, and I like that. Your style in writing this poem is pretty simple yet powerful. Yes, you stated the obvious, ...
Apr 21, 2016 -
Re: Teenagers
Writervid, The words you have used are not really complicated like what other writers use, and it hit me. It hit me right to my core. Letting me remember howf ...
Jan 30, 2016 -
Re: The Rivers Clinic
This thing right here is capturing for me. It's amazing how this piece is heavy and light at the same time. Just like how you felt that some of your ...
May 23, 2015 -
Re: The Wingless Angel
This work is awesome. I know someone like this. She once was kind but was swallowed up by the things around her. Things were too much for her to take ...
Dec 7, 2014 -
Re: Ode To The Wretched Soul
Hey Wes! So this is sort of a love story ode, eh? The moment I read it I was totally captured. The words which you have used are so captivating. ...
Dec 7, 2014 -
Re: Bedtime
Nice one Purple! This is such a big reality to most people. Laying your head down on any of that fluffy pillows is indeed relaxing somehow, but if you are ...
Dec 1, 2014 -
Re: if everything could change and life could be different
Hey there Olivia! You've got yourself a heavy poem there huh? Well, it's nice to ease up at times and comfort yourself a little by expressing yourself and speaking your ...
Dec 1, 2014 -
Re: fort
Dear Birkhoff (hekhek), I'm here for a review (ain;t that obvious? kyahaa) You got here a nice poem. Well, yeah sort of nice at first ( to fort), but then ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Overload
Hey musicandme! It's me again. Let's see how you did here. Hmmm. Great again! Your title fit your content. It was full indeed. It was overloaded, not with words that ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Living Stories
thegreyreality, I love your work so much that you leave me speechless (but that doesn't mean I would leave you with just a comment). You said the truth and nothing ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: deleted
Star, 'sup? You sounded just like the classical poets of the olden times. Awesome! I love reading poems when it sounds classical. It seems to freshen my head. :) Although ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Change The Direction of The Air
Greetings AnaMin! Your poem here sounded like a song lyric to me. ;) That's not a bad thing though. It's great that you have been thinking about changing things around ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: OMIT
Hey there Tiff! Vibe here for a review (that's obvious, silly me). Sure you got your self some poem there, huh? I love how you organized your poem. You have ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: The End of the Mirror
Hey there Blackwood! This piece is great. I was hooked to reading this one. As expected from a Young Writer's Society's writers. Grammatically speaking, this one is not bad. Content ...
Nov 29, 2014 -
Re: My dear beloved,
Well hello there Katie! Welcome to YWS. Hmmm. It is short but I find it fine. You have here your statement which you wanted to tell someone. It was great ...
Nov 29, 2014
