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  • Poetry » General, General Re: if i were a color

    ChocolateCello, You make a great deal about the color blue, and I like that. Your style in writing this poem is pretty simple yet powerful. Yes, you stated the obvious, ...

    Apr 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Teenagers

    Writervid, The words you have used are not really complicated like what other writers use, and it hit me. It hit me right to my core. Letting me remember howf ...

    Jan 30, 2016
  • Other » General, General Re: The Rivers Clinic

    This thing right here is capturing for me. It's amazing how this piece is heavy and light at the same time. Just like how you felt that some of your ...

    May 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Wingless Angel

    This work is awesome. I know someone like this. She once was kind but was swallowed up by the things around her. Things were too much for her to take ...

    Dec 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Ode To The Wretched Soul

    Hey Wes! So this is sort of a love story ode, eh? The moment I read it I was totally captured. The words which you have used are so captivating. ...

    Dec 7, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Bedtime

    Nice one Purple! This is such a big reality to most people. Laying your head down on any of that fluffy pillows is indeed relaxing somehow, but if you are ...

    Dec 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: if everything could change and life could be different

    Hey there Olivia! You've got yourself a heavy poem there huh? Well, it's nice to ease up at times and comfort yourself a little by expressing yourself and speaking your ...

    Dec 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: fort

    Dear Birkhoff (hekhek), I'm here for a review (ain;t that obvious? kyahaa) You got here a nice poem. Well, yeah sort of nice at first ( to fort), but then ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Overload

    Hey musicandme! It's me again. Let's see how you did here. Hmmm. Great again! Your title fit your content. It was full indeed. It was overloaded, not with words that ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Living Stories

    thegreyreality, I love your work so much that you leave me speechless (but that doesn't mean I would leave you with just a comment). You said the truth and nothing ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: deleted

    Star, 'sup? You sounded just like the classical poets of the olden times. Awesome! I love reading poems when it sounds classical. It seems to freshen my head. :) Although ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Change The Direction of The Air

    Greetings AnaMin! Your poem here sounded like a song lyric to me. ;) That's not a bad thing though. It's great that you have been thinking about changing things around ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: OMIT

    Hey there Tiff! Vibe here for a review (that's obvious, silly me). Sure you got your self some poem there, huh? I love how you organized your poem. You have ...

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, Spiritual Re: The End of the Mirror

    Hey there Blackwood! This piece is great. I was hooked to reading this one. As expected from a Young Writer's Society's writers. Grammatically speaking, this one is not bad. Content ...

    Nov 29, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: My dear beloved,

    Well hello there Katie! Welcome to YWS. Hmmm. It is short but I find it fine. You have here your statement which you wanted to tell someone. It was great ...

    Nov 29, 2014


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