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Well I'm going to go ahead and leave it here or I may move it to "other", because right now it's isn't really poetry but it isn't really a story ...

It was a stanza by stanza thing, but you've changed quite a bit of it and it has helped a lot! A few things are still iffy though: In the ...

Okay. I will look into it. *Locked*

I say again: No Chatspeak! You have to take harsh comments as they are. If you don't want a critique then why are you posting it? If you don't want ...

I am fixing your title again, for the third time today. Please do not write the title in caps.

Figs must be a very strong aphrodisiac XD Very cute matt, very cute! Seriously...nothing rhymes with oink! Haha!

I love Nick Hornby :)

So this might be a fairy tale with a happy ending after all, if the pot lasts long enough. Did you actually mean the pot or did you mean the ...

I have only one question: Why are you drowning me?

Hmm Hmm? Does it? I love to post. I love it the most. And I know I must boast, About how I love to post, And how I love toast-- ...

Hi Kazie-- I fixed your title, please don't use all caps in the title (or any other funky thing..) Thanks!

Thanks, Rigel! I'm usually pretty anal about form as well, but this time I just couldn't be...don't know why but it just didn't seem right to have a structure for ...

No double posting, please. Can you run spellcheck on your poem please and proof read it? "i" needs to be capitalized and all that jazz. Apostrophes need to be added. ...

Thanks for the Comments, all. It is not about an unwanted child nor a younger version of the narrator. I have never seen another poem written about the subject it ...

I'm actually really excited for this to come out. It looks really good. There is a similar movie coming out in January that looks equally delicious.