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It's hard when your girl says "goodbye" and you don't [s]even[/s] know the reason why. It's hard when your girl says "it's over" and you know you've lost your lover. ...

Capitalization is your friend, shake hands with it. Other than that, although I like the topic, it wasn't too spectacularly formulated. "Until you live your life" is repeated too often ...

I actually quite like the idea of this. I think my favorite stanza is the first one, however. But, as previously commented, the rhyme scheme changes and that's not particularly ...

Mmm. Okay. Mushrooms are apparently very diverse. It was random, kind of random to a point past "funny" and onto "uh, whaa?" and I can't say that's truly a good ...

Hmm. I liked it, actually. Oddly. It was awfully disturbing. But, I appreciated the deeper meaning to it...that I may or may not have made up so that it wouldn't ...

Stretch your hand against the sky: No puedo cubrir el cielo,* you sigh and turn to me, your juice-stained lips as tempting as any ripened fruit a poet has ever ...

[s]A [/s]mysterious and magical creature [s], [/s] comes to us in dreams ; [s]and[/s] stories always eluding us. You don't need "and" in the third line, just add a semicolon ...

A part of life that will always follow us, we can never escape it’s cold embrace, and no one can by their way out of it. I'm pretty sure you ...

I was actually rather bored. So they meet up, and then decide to spill their lives to each other randomly? "Hi stranger, let me tell you about how my parents ...

Give me a little while to decide what I think about prose poetry and how to address it in a helpful way, and I will get back to you on ...

I actually liked this very much. I saw it when it was first posted, but I 'm so friggin' tired of suicide and wrist cutting and all that jazz poems ...

I feel like this would serve better as narrative poetry. The story is actually very good, but 'dramatic poetry' is not very fitting to the piece. If it is in ...

Mm yay, harshness. "We're all wearing masks"...well wippifriggindo. That's only the 98293843rd time I've heard that. Cliche much? It is not bad, per se, to do something that has potential ...

I am Me, can't you see, that I will be... ...Me. Slightly repetitive, eh? Saying the same thing twice does not make it better for the reader. Today I am ...

Okay, I have a few things: 1. Too much repetition. If you want to use waiting as the repetition, put it at the first word or the last word in ...