Vex15

The first line should say, "As the world burns" with an 's'. The fifth line should be re-written as: "The sky that loses its beautiful color", and the sixth line ...

This is funny. But it's true. Because most people I know really can't. They try so hard to think of a topic and then give up. And I like how ...

I like this. I really do. It's short and to the point. Talking about a 'star' hunter who is musical, charming, noisy, and cool all simultaneously. I like the line ...

This is good. It's also true-- my older sister and I have a eight-and-a-half year gap between us. Really heartfelt, and has strong feeling use in it. Congratulations! I enjoyed ...

Okay- negatives first. Not to be mean, I promise. But there are just a few misspelled words on here, and the second line has a mistake. I can relate to ...

This is very, very long... confusing too. And the language- there are other younger writers on here who would not like to see or read that. And you're taking the ...

Well, that swear word- use of profane language- certainly gets me an instant disliking to this poem. It's confusing.... and I don't really see the humor here. I guess it's ...

I really, really liked this!! Romantic, lyrical, and mysterious is how I, as a reader and poet, would best describe this. The repetitive use of the word "love!" is good ...

I love this new piece of work!!! It is so real!! I agree with all of this, because this is currently happening to me. I met a guy, got together, ...

I can't tell you how much I loved this piece!! It's beautiful, absolutely true. I agree with every single line, though as humans we sometimes do the opposite. The second ...

Wonderful, descriptive vocabulary!! I love the rhyming in this poem. From what I've seen, these sentences have depth and meaning... and leads people to compare to something in their life ...

I am into these kinds of writing!! This was a great love poem!! I often write poems and songs like this, though I've never really shared them with others. They're ...

I can see you have bold feelings in this work. I like this type of writing- deep, secretive (kind of), full of emotion, and sometimes anger from actions. I can ...

:) :) this is highly descriptive, wonderful, and filled with emotion. I like how the mood varies back and forth. And there's meanings to some of the lines that I ...