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HI there Skins. I like this, it's a fun and amusing piece, I think it would appeal to younger audiences. There are a few things I think you could improve ...

Hi GildedLily I'm not really sure about this piece. I would like to congratulate you on the originality and interesting structure of this piece. This is rather uplifting piece, my ...

Hi, dreamy155 I like this, it is a very easy, accessible song lyrics, I can almost imagine A tune to them. I like that the lines themselves are very short, ...

Hi nova I liked this poem. It had a good story and image to it. There is a little room for improvement though, This is just a little block I ...

Hi Golden Quill Hmm... not quite sure what I think of this. I agree with Snoink when she says there is a lot of imagery and not much else. Although ...

Hi Genshawklan. I like this poem. I like the way you structured it so it looks like a tree (Very clever) I also very much like the poem itself. Your ...

Hi kingolions Nice poem. I'd like to congratulate you on your flow. It's very good and solid and one of the strengths in this poem. The mood of this poem ...

Hi ArahinaSiddel This is a very good poem. You have a lot of skill in describing a scene and making a perfect picture in people's heads. This image on what ...

Hi dogs Hmm, I'm not sure what I think of this. In parts these lyrics veer off into being very ordinary love song like, but your use of metaphors and ...

Hello Kyollorc This is an interesting poem. It's very well written and I love your use of language. Using the commas on the first line of every stanza really separates ...

Hi loller65. This is a good poem. As you said it is unique and oddball and I am impressed that you can write something like this in 5 minutes.There is ...

Hello originalhobbit I like your piece. It's rather interesting portrait. I would like to point out that to m it's only a image, not a story, and although I can ...

This is a very good piece. The whole teenage angst, no one understands me especially my parent feel can easily come off whiny and annoying but this is pitch perfect. ...

I really like this poem. It's dark glommy tragic deppsing to an extent and somewhat heavy. The story Is one ive heard a lot, the tragic story of a misguied ...

Hi I really like this poem. Even though it's very you've made a very clear, crisp picture in my mind. it's almost like a scene in a film. I would ...