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Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.12)
Hmm... I will find some way to fix that night vision thing. You learn new things, eh? As for point three, I have a challenge for you. Look up the ...
Dec 31, 2015 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.11)
I like to think that Martin has always had grace in him, but he didn't want to embrace it. Besides, he does pull on Divinity's hair at the end, and ...
Dec 31, 2015 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.10)
Haha! This week's chapter is basically the explanation-overload, which is poor planning on my part, but it needed to be done. Anyways, I've fixed the first two notes, but it ...
Dec 31, 2015 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.09)
Oh, but Hunter, I have switched perspectives mid-chapter before. I even went full omniscient in a few cases. As for point 5, I am glad you picked up on the ...
Dec 31, 2015 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.08)
Ugh... I can't believe I made all those gross mistakes. Thanks for catching them!
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.07)
I fixed your note and the thing about Willow's question. The uselessness thing was really Willow's opinion slipping into the narration, though it seems I didn't get that across. Thanks!
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.06)
Oh hohohoho! You shall see, Hunter! Also, I am glad to know that all my time spent in Taiwanese night markets has not gone to waste. Thanks!
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.05)
Fixing the typos now... Thanks as always! (Also, you will get your wish on Martin's turning. :) )
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.04)
Willow is easily upset, and it's one of her flaws, really. I feel that all characters need both flaws and strong points. Also, despite the fact that powerful folk are ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.03)
Note 1: Oops. I must have forgotten to mention that Mr. Pyus is the only passenger on board. I'll fix that immediately. As for Impression 1... well, you'll just have ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.02)
Yay! I did well! By the way, Julie Andrews is a famous movie star who played a lot of singing roles for young women. She's a household name in the ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.01)
Ah, I did rename the chapters, yes. They are now arranged by landmark moments in mystery plots. Also, I will fix that note right away. Thanks for pointing it out!
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.12)
Pfft, this was like the imagery chapter. Besides, now when I revisit this route, I can just do reminder descriptions. And is starless really a word? I got red squigglies ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.11)
Aww, thank you! I'm so glad to hear that someone is keeping up with the story!
Dec 22, 2015 -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 19): Tree Climbing 010
Oh, and also, did you do the 010 on purpose, or is it supposed to be 101?
Dec 20, 2015