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Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.01)
Ah, I did rename the chapters, yes. They are now arranged by landmark moments in mystery plots. Also, I will fix that note right away. Thanks for pointing it out!
Wed Dec 30, 2015 4:13 pm -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.12)
Pfft, this was like the imagery chapter. Besides, now when I revisit this route, I can just do reminder descriptions. And is starless really a word? I got red squigglies ...
Wed Dec 30, 2015 4:07 pm -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.11)
Aww, thank you! I'm so glad to hear that someone is keeping up with the story!
Tue Dec 22, 2015 3:29 pm -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 19): Tree Climbing 010
Oh, and also, did you do the 010 on purpose, or is it supposed to be 101?
Sun Dec 20, 2015 1:41 am -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.06)
ACK, A TYPO! I shall fix that straight away. Sorry I never got around to those reviews I promised to catch up on this week. I went on another baking ...
Sat Dec 19, 2015 5:55 am -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.06)
Yeah, the third-person present throws off some people (myself included), but it gives a sense of "here and now" that I quite like. I'll look over those things you mentioned. ...
Sun Nov 29, 2015 10:30 pm -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.04)
A weeping willow is an actual plant. Did you combine Moaning Myrtle and that one car-trapping tree? I actually haven't decided on Willow and Drake. It depends on how I ...
Wed Nov 25, 2015 1:09 am -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.03)
I thought Rick might see this scene as if he's watching a movie that goes into slow motion, so maybe that's what you're picking up on. Since the characters in ...
Tue Nov 24, 2015 12:04 am -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 15): Hide-and-Hide
Ugh I promise I am going to get to this review. Tech week is death.
Thu Nov 12, 2015 12:06 am -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.02)
Hoorah! I knew including little details would help keep the tone I wanted! Thanks for the review! I promise I'll be caught up with yours by the end of Wednesday.
Sun Nov 08, 2015 5:05 pm -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.01)
The feelings of longtime friends are sometimes difficult to decipher... Muhahaha. Also, you will certainly get an awesome Drake scene quite soon. :)
Thu Nov 05, 2015 2:10 pm -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.12)
Hmm, I follow a pretty strict rule on paragraphing, so I'm not sure how I'd fix that, but I'll keep your advice in mind. Thanks to you and your friend!
Thu Nov 05, 2015 4:34 am -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.01)
Err, this is actually part of the same book. I just divided it differently than usual. Thank you for the review!
Mon Oct 26, 2015 2:49 am -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 13): Ending it with a Bang
Err... A-plus-plus... Those plus signs somehow snuck out.
Sun Oct 25, 2015 11:21 pm -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 13): Ending it with a Bang
OH MY GOD I TOTALLY FORGOT TO MENTION THIS: Your title is fantabulous. A pun usage.
Sun Oct 25, 2015 11:20 pm