Ventomology

Heyyy! This was an interesting read. I love how you've totally forgone a lot of the exposition that might set up the world in this story in favor of letting ...

Ohhhhh my god the suspense about Cyrin's mage... class? Idk what the term for major and minor is lol. Anyway the suspense is killing me. I thought we'd finally get ...

Hii! The title of this poem immediately grabbed me in the green room. Triptychs are a really fun form of visual art, so I was curious to see how that ...

Hiiii! Let's get right into this. I'm sure you have your reasons for the particular way in which you reveal information to us... but I'm a little curious why, since ...

Eyoooo. Back again! It's so fun to see Kaja in action! Also I love violence. Now... you've mentioned two different sources of magic, and I'm really curious now: is magic ...

Haha I went back and looked for the chapter with Leilan and Kaja and the kid from the ruined house just to check. Alas, the other guy's name was Marius. ...

Hey there!! I love seeing the office setting in books- it might have been popularized in TV by The Office, but I think western writers overlook it in favor of ...

Well. Figured I should probably start somewhere on the reviews haha. Maybe I'll be caught up by the end of RevMo! I'll be honest in my first read through of ...

Heyyyy. This work is such a throwback for me. I've actually been to that Salt and Straw. And the one in Seattle lol. Go PNW! Anyway, as Foxmaster and IcyFlame ...

Heyyy!! I'm coming into this without having read the other parts this time... I'd love to, but your list of related works is getting very long and hard to sort ...

Eyyy what up. I totally left all that sappy "tag me next chapter" stuff and then immediately saw this in the green room haha. Still stands though! Let's get into ...

Heyyy! Back at it again with more fun poems. I really love the sheer amount of rhyming + consonance/assonance you've managed to fit in here. Like no joke that is ...

Okay so I saw your newest poem and the title of this one caught my eye in the sidebar and I was like ummm? In-world poetry? Extremely cool. I want ...

Hey there! Dropping by for a quick revmo review. Let's dive right in. As someone who is fascinated by the ways in which people interact with their surroundings, particularly in ...

Heyyyy! I thiink you might have accidentally copied a section of your writing twice- the bit after the picture of Abigail's mom is a repeat from earlier in the chapter. ...