Ventomology

I am so incredibly lost. Now I know how BlueAfrica must have felt reading my work. Technical Comments: Skipped. Plot, Characterization, and Misc. Items: 1. So like, I know Eremia ...

Hey bro! This is sort of unrelated, but have you considered sticking a map up on your page that I can bookmark or something? Because I get super lost every ...

Okay wow that first bit with Rowland was uncomfy. Sorry for being so slow. The big paper is in, so I should be in better shape next week as far ...

Ooh Eremia finally gets stuff done! ...I should probably get stuff done too. Technical Comments: 1. Small thing, but I feel like the "That woke Jonah up" line is probably ...

...Did you forget to tag? I had to actually search for this. Anyways, sorry for the wait! Technical Comments: 1. I have a little nitpick, which is that when Alarick ...

I hate long drives with my parents, so I'm going to pretend that I purposefully put this review off until late at night in order to be better able to ...

Alright, I made it! Sorry for the wait. Let's get this party started. Technical Comments: 1. This is a personal preference thing, but I wouldn't use the / symbol. It's ...

My last day of work is tomorrow and things have been way hectic, and I apologize for being so late to this party. Technical Comments: 1. So you do this ...

Hmm. I knew I shouldn't have waited until tonight. Now I can't earn a badge for the entire novel. Let's dive in, shall we? Technical Comments: There's only one this ...

Heyo! I don't have any witty or self-deprecating introductory comments this week, so let's just dive right in: Technical Comments: 1. Dear lord that 'the girl' 'the boy' stuff still ...

Dearest Fox, I once reviewed a novel made entirely of chapters over 5K. I promise that 2K is nothing. Personally, I wouldn't worry about word count until you go over ...

We're gonna do this real fast 'cause I need sleep, but I still want one of the first two reviews. Technical Comments: 1. Wow, so another thing about name replacements ...

Yo! I see we're delving straight into Jonah's escape plan. Hoo boy. Technical Comments: 1. Put spaces between your ellipses and the following word. Some people will tell you to ...

... This chapter leaves me feeling vaguely uncomfortable, and not in a what-is-Jonah-up-to way. I mean, I got that too, just... we'll discuss this later. Technical Comments: The thing about ...

I'm back! (Not... Bach, just back.) Let's get a move on, shall we? Technical Comments: I feel like there isn't enough emotion in this scene. Yes, you have adequately explained ...