VeniVidiVici

Interesting story. I imagine the inspiration came from Attack on Titan? It was different enough from it.

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To explain some things: The politician was the target, that much was obvious. What was less obvious was that character ended up shooting the wrong man. To the police, it ...

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Thank you very much for reading my piece! I'm glad you enjoyed it. My ego has been stroked thoroughly with your kind words. Again thank you for the encouragement. :)

Thanks for the criticism without any points on improving. While I do appreciate you reading my work, I don't care if you were offended. Not all poetry is written to ...

The spelling errors were kept there on purpose, I didn't revise anything except some annoyances. Stream of consciousness means I didn't follow up with editing my work. The beginning was ...

This was very eery to read in the darkness. I envisioned the embodiment of Death in my head as the poem smoothly transitioned from stanza to stanza. My favorite lines ...

Don't ever apologize for your works. Even if they're written in haste. Only apologize that you didn't have more time.

Thank you for your thoughts! I'm a little new to poetry so I just did what came naturally. I think you accidentally your sentence in that last paragraph but I ...

The first humans being killed was a mixture of protecting their territory, their young, and capitalizing on an easy kill. The young child had the young wolf "vouch" for him ...

Thanks!:)

It's like a mixture of a novel and short stories. I plan on having it be like a long short story--thingy. So there will be more, but they'll all be ...

I always appreciate a thoughtful review!:) Thanks so much and yes, I usually write my stories late at night so it's a miracle they're not littered with more errors. lol. ...

Thank you for the critique:) I absolutely love long comments and reviews. Your comment really did get to me because I wasn't sure whether my writing skills were up to ...