Velvet.whispers

Dear all, thank you for your comments, I didn't spend much time on this, I guess they're more lyrics than poetry because I did hum them when I wrote them, ...

This is really lovely! Great flow, great description, quite mysterious and elliptic as well! I like it, it's the sort one can read again and again and again and still ...

Hey, this is really simple and sweet. I love the natural delivery and this shows promise, but try and think about how each sentence sounds more, repeat your words in ...

Thank you all, glad you enjoyed it.

"things I have done", you presume too much maybe ?!

Thank you!

Revenge will be sweet and ugg american spelling i cannot stomach x

What is "star-crossed" or "carefully-worded"?! Cause flowery is a bit girly :p God I'm bored please don't abandon me! pps have I mentioned how much I looove this poem?! Oh ...

Ah yes, star-crossed you mean! x ps well I prefer yours but Valentine prefers mine probably because it's in your face rather than carefully worded :p

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Oops, looks like I failed...

Hey! Yes it is suppose to be one poem that gains momentum by adding the seperate bits together, Keats does this quite a lot as do other poets x

There, mistakes edited away, sorry was a bit tired, thank you for pointing it out!

Still not sure what it means! x

Hey, i promise to make these edits, fast. I don't know whether I'll reuse Gemma or not, I was thinking of collected Fragments of characters, sort of half like a ...