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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Little Boxcar Boys

    Thanks, Wolfical! I'll let my Grandad know his work is appreciated ;)

    May 2, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Rain and Sadness

    Thank you so much for your comments! I will take them to heart :) I wrote this when I was going through a hard time in my life, and really ...

    May 2, 2018
  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Diss Song

    This is fantastic xD

    Nov 27, 2016
  • Lyrics » Humor, Satire Re: cooking.

    I can't review this because I am not even close to being on your level, but I had to thank you for sharing. This was fantastic to read xD

    Nov 27, 2016
  • Article / Essay » Literature, Dramatic Re: Define 'Nefarious'

    I will be back to review this in the next few days. @Mea this is hilarious timing, and I have to agree with your summation :D

    Nov 12, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Not dying, but falling in love

    I honestly don't think I am rightly qualified to make judgement upon this piece, it is utterly beyond my ability to critique. All I can say is that you are ...

    Sep 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Culture Re: The Power of Words

    Thank you so much! All of these reviews have meant so much to me and I feel like I can really begin to improve my work. As to your comment ...

    Sep 7, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: So Alone

    Sep 7, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Rocks

    Chilow again for another review :D Thank you so much for turning me on to this poem as well! I was not wrong in saying that I was sure your ...

    Sep 6, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: if i were a color

    This is great! .....And now i want to do one. Mind if I reuse your title? XD

    Apr 26, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: The Real Apocalypse Happened Between My Fingers

    Poems like this make me glad that I started on YWS :) This has a deeper meaning than I was expecting when I clicked on it and it makes me ...

    Apr 8, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter 1 - Silence is much more than not talking.

    I look forward to some character development then :) Carry on with the good work! P.S. Even if you were a terrible writer (which you aren't!) I would absolutely give ...

    Jan 9, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Wolf QUeen

    No problem! I kinda had thought she died, but my fingers were crossed against it ;( Anyway, glad to have seen this!

    Jan 9, 2016


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
— LCDR Geordi La Forge