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Re: Queen of the Lake- Chapter 1 *NEW* *Rewritten*
Thank you so much, this was really helpful!
Sun May 07, 2017 2:33 pm -
Re: Queen of the Lake- Chapter 1
This is a rewritten version of the first chapter.
Sat May 06, 2017 9:32 pm -
Re: Leash-on-pets---
Oh, the dashes makes sense now and you always need to be ambiguous.
Sat May 06, 2017 4:16 pm -
Re: Malala
Oh thanks, that makes sense!
Fri May 05, 2017 10:26 pm -
Re: Fate of a Porcelain Doll
Pretty much what Aleta said. I loved your poem!
Tue May 02, 2017 2:35 am -
Re: Tik Tok Review Clock
This is just perfect!
Sat Apr 29, 2017 9:35 pm -
Re: Dark Paradise
It is supposed to be a poem, sorry I did this when I was really tired
Sat Apr 29, 2017 2:44 pm -
Re: Geist Mistress
Then should be than in the second to last stanza because you are saying hell is closer not Heaven. Then should be used in events like time and than should ...
Fri Apr 28, 2017 10:32 pm -
Re: When Spring Has Passed
No problem!
Fri Apr 28, 2017 2:51 am -
Re: The Wilting Rose
Hey, SarukaTheHuman! I did what you said because that made a lot more sense to me. I was wondering if you could look at it to see if everything looks ...
Thu Apr 27, 2017 2:23 am -
Re: Idyllic
No problem!
Thu Apr 27, 2017 2:14 am -
Re: Idyllic
Oh sorry, it didn't show me. If you have GoogleDrive, you can start your poem on there and screenshot it. And when you go to publish it go to the ...
Thu Apr 27, 2017 2:09 am -
Re: Memories of My Best Friend
You pretty much summed everything up that I could possibly say. So great job for doing that.
Tue Apr 25, 2017 1:39 am -
Re: The Wilting Rose
I updated it but you probably can't tell :shock:
Tue Apr 25, 2017 1:09 am -
Re: The Wilting Rose
I am keeping my comma's though. Because it is a description of the mouth then the eyes, so different things. And, the comma is there to say "and" in a ...
Tue Apr 25, 2017 1:01 am