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Re: Queen of the Lake- Chapter 1 *NEW* *Rewritten*
Thank you so much, this was really helpful!
May 7, 2017 -
Re: Queen of the Lake- Chapter 1
This is a rewritten version of the first chapter.
May 6, 2017 -
Re: Leash-on-pets---
Oh, the dashes makes sense now and you always need to be ambiguous.
May 6, 2017 -
Re: Malala
Oh thanks, that makes sense!
May 5, 2017 -
Re: Fate of a Porcelain Doll
Pretty much what Aleta said. I loved your poem!
May 2, 2017 -
Re: Tik Tok Review Clock
This is just perfect!
Apr 29, 2017 -
Re: Dark Paradise
It is supposed to be a poem, sorry I did this when I was really tired
Apr 29, 2017 -
Re: Geist Mistress
Then should be than in the second to last stanza because you are saying hell is closer not Heaven. Then should be used in events like time and than should ...
Apr 28, 2017 -
Re: When Spring Has Passed
No problem!
Apr 28, 2017 -
Re: The Wilting Rose
Hey, SarukaTheHuman! I did what you said because that made a lot more sense to me. I was wondering if you could look at it to see if everything looks ...
Apr 27, 2017 -
Re: Idyllic
No problem!
Apr 27, 2017 -
Re: Idyllic
Oh sorry, it didn't show me. If you have GoogleDrive, you can start your poem on there and screenshot it. And when you go to publish it go to the ...
Apr 27, 2017 -
Re: Memories of My Best Friend
You pretty much summed everything up that I could possibly say. So great job for doing that.
Apr 25, 2017 -
Re: The Wilting Rose
I updated it but you probably can't tell :shock:
Apr 25, 2017 -
Re: The Wilting Rose
I am keeping my comma's though. Because it is a description of the mouth then the eyes, so different things. And, the comma is there to say "and" in a ...
Apr 25, 2017