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Re: The Pressure
The way you put the poem is how I had it in mind. Thank you for the review!! Happy Friday the 13th!!
Sat Oct 14, 2017 1:54 am -
Re: Yin Yang
Not really, I just have to delete this one, edit it, and post the new one.
Fri Oct 13, 2017 8:44 pm -
Re: Yin Yang
Thank you for all of this! I think I'm going to use some of it XD Your help was really useful.
Fri Oct 13, 2017 12:25 am -
Re: Teardrops
Lovely poem
Wed May 24, 2017 9:25 pm -
Re: madhouse of carousels
The name of your poem reminds me of a Melanie Martinez song! Love the poem!
Sat May 20, 2017 7:02 pm -
Re: Under My Cloak Of Darkness *Rewritten*
I was inspired by Ji-Li Jiang's story about her life and how she thought the world was broken. I also had to write this for a sixth grade project, so ...
Sat May 20, 2017 1:53 am -
Re: What a breakup feels like
Thanks!
Wed May 17, 2017 2:39 am -
Re: Sonata of Your Afterglow
Thanks for responding! :)
Fri May 12, 2017 11:22 pm -
Re: I am a Poet
No problem!
Wed May 10, 2017 7:59 pm -
Re: My Name Is *New*
Funny, I needed to see this review today because now I'm smiling. :)
Mon May 08, 2017 8:14 pm -
Re: My Name Is *New*
Thank you!
Mon May 08, 2017 2:57 am -
Re: My Name Is
Thanks!
Mon May 08, 2017 12:12 am -
Re: My Name Is
Thanks for the review! This was one of my earlier works and trust me when I say this it is completely horrible. It was so bad that I just left ...
Mon May 08, 2017 12:06 am -
Re: Rollercoaster Ride
Alright and Thanks!
Sun May 07, 2017 11:38 pm -
Re: Rollercoaster Ride
I see you changed the last bit of your poem. I feel like that flows a lot better than what you did have.
Sun May 07, 2017 11:17 pm