VegasLights

Hello, Notrandomatall. Steam1244 here to give you a review. I like the concept of your story, how everything was put together. But I feel as if it could have been ...

Hello, RippleGylf. Steam1244 here to give you a review! While reading this, please know I make no sense sometimes; to other people and me too. However, I'm confused, but I'm ...

Hello, TheSilverFox. Steam1244 here to give you a review! I was A little confused in the first stanza. I was confused in one particular area. "Or aiming and shooting the ...

Hello, Wilard. Steam1244 here to give you a review. There is nothing really that I could critique. The only thing I notice is, capitalization. Like at the beginning of the ...

Hello, pkidchick. Steam1244 here for a review! I have to say, this is a really good short story. Some things that I found were just little things. For example, semi-circle ...

Hello, Nikayla and Alliyah. Steam1244 here to review! I have to say, I understand this poem completely. I love how it somewhat relates to today's society. I do not know ...

WOW, what a great poem. I agree with RossLighting on the fact that the poem was too long. I loved it anyway though. Your ending was powerful, and I loved ...

Hello, AllisontheWriter. Steam1244 here for a review! I must say this was really good! Your rhyming was great, but one mistake was the word, comprehend. I have to agree with ...

Hello, ScarlettFire. Steam1244 here to review! I have to say this piece is perfect! I'm going to have to agree with RoseTulipLily on staring down at the bar. I say ...

Hello, AnxhelaSem! Steam1244 here to review. I have to say that this poem has a very deep meaning, and I love it! I can see a clear image, I have ...

Hello, BlueSunset! I am here to give you a review. I love how the imagery is just so clear to see, I mean your poem is very clear. I only ...

Hello there, I loved how you worded the poem. I feel like this is a great piece of work. I am confused on some things, like the first sentence. I ...

I have to say you are truly amazing! I love the way that you let the poem unfold into a deep meaning. You talk about pills that will not help, ...

I completely understand this poem, it is really good! It shows you to let loose, even though you told yourself not to. I loved the way you ended the poem, ...

I completely agree with you on this subject. It feels like we can't trust anyone because they would just hurt us. We are fragile beings, we break and people just ...