VegasLights

Hello, RyleighInWonderland. Steam1244 here to give you a review, let's get to it! I have to say the way you worded this story was really good. I also must admit ...

Hello, BlueSunset. Steam1244 here to give you a review. I'm so sorry *hugs you*, I know what it's like to lose a pet; in that way too. I love the ...

Hello, ticktock123. Steam1244 here to give you a review. I must say that I agree with Sheyren on telling a story with about 200-ish words! I'm a girl, and I ...

Hello, insertwordshere. Miranda here to give you a review! I thought your poem had a deep meaning, and kept through with it. I liked the words you chose to put ...

Hello, Queenie. Steam1244 here to give you a review! I must say that I loved your poem. I've noticed 2 things though. For example, why are the stanzas on different ...

Hello, sophiereichelt. Miranda here to give you a review. I have to say this is the second poem that I've ever read to actually connect with me. The second line, ...

Hello, bookishminecrafter! Miranda here to give you a review! I loved the color theme, and how it represented certain items. I have a couple of concerns about your story. For ...

Hello fellow member of Sparta. Miranda here to give you a review. I have to say I do love reading your poems, they are magnificent! I hope you keep writing ...

Hello, fellow member of Sparta. Steam1244 here to give you a review! I must say I love your work, how you explained everything. A few things I have noticed are ...

Hello, Chaser. Steam1244 here to give you a review! This poem is really neat, unfortunately I didn't understand part of it. The second stanza confused me a lot, sorry. I ...

Hello, Alliyah. Steam1244 here to give you a review! I love how you presented the poem to the readers. How certain words you put into italics and how you left ...

Hello, Castor. Steam1244 here to give you a review! I noticed a few grammar mistakes while reading your poem. Even though I am not one who could speak, because I ...

Hello, beccalicious94. Steam1244 here to give you a review. Overall, I loved your poem, it was magnificent. I loved the way you opened your poem. How you use that to ...

Hello, Apricity. Steam1244 here to give you a review. I thought Your piece was absolutely amazing! I thought my computer was glitching out on me, but it was the coolest ...

Hello, ScytheMeister. Steam1244 here to give you a review. I love the general meaning of your poem. I don't think it is bad at all, I think it is actually ...