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Well... Count of Monte Cristo is the only book that pops into my mind. Its by Alexandre Dumas...

I only read the first paragraph of the prologue of the book... haha... even though my friends tell me that its only the prologue thats boring, I can't bring myself ...

Hello! This is a really cute poem but I agree with Riedawriter. I don't really know what I'm feeling right now...

Hehe Cabbage is a cute name! This was really sweet. I love it and there isn't that much to fix. Hehe.. Cabbage...

I didn't get the ending too... And this line: Another couple stumbles of nervousness backwards on my part. Confused me a lot so you might try rephrasing it...

This is a nice story. I especially liked the fact that you didn't really show what happened to the daughter of the captain. Makes the draw conclusions from the other ...

Love it! Especially these lines: "Songs that speak to my soul Tug at the stiches Holding my heart together" I love the flow of the piece and the emotion oozing ...

thanks!

This is an interesting piece and I think it would be better if you describe more of the scenes and such..

Thanks! And I will try you're suggestion to see which is better!

Thanks for a very helpful criticism! I will definitely correct those errors as soon as possible!

Reading your comment makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside! thank you!

this is a good piece even though the ending was kind of expected. And I think that this goes under poetry.. I'm not quite sure what kind of poetry though.. ...

Reading this placed a smile on my face! :D