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Hi there. Okay, having a degree in nuclear engineering, this really sounded unbelievable to me, for a few reasons. 1. You only mention that there's one nuclear bomb. Right now, ...

Hey there! I really like the idea of this--a poem about a genie. And the third wish is awesome. Definitely Aladdin-ish, but it made me smile nonetheless. And your ideas ...

Hey! So, this was really hard to read. I got it on the first try and everything, but the accent just didn't seem right--it's supposed to be Southern, yes? I'm ...

Hi Bugwhisker! (I like your name, by the way.) I'm Freyja, and first of all I just have to say, "Snaaaaaaaake! :D" I love snakes, so I'm happy to see ...

Hi LiveScreamWriting. First off, about you finishing, if you want to finish, do it! Don't leave it up to everyone else. Whenever you write something, it should be about what's ...

Kaywiia! Whee, another RHG story! I love seeing those characters' back stories. They're all so awesomely awesome. It seemed just a tad rushed, and pretty short. Of course, short's not ...

Psh, way to make me cry, Classy. It reminds me of my best friend, who died recently. More specifically, the fact that right before she went, she seemed to mature ...

Hi Olli. Here I am, as requested. Crazy is just a word, a spiteful one at that. This line doesn't really draw me in that well. I'm not sure what ...

Hi Tanya! Me again! This one was a lot easier to read than the last one. The length is good, and the action really moves it right along. Good job! ...

Hi Biffle. So I think what you have here could be a good idea. It seems plausible that a person (whom I'm assuming is deranged) could view the adoption of ...

Hello! Sorry that took so long. Right after you reminded me, I caught some infection that downed me completely for a few days. :( But I'm on the path to ...

Hey Connie. I'm gonna try to give you my input despite my brain being a bit broken. So I like this idea--the fairy tale feel of it. Of course, I'm ...

Hello there! Sorry about the wait, but I said I would, and here I am. The beginning is a really good hook-in. However, I might suggest taking "Lucky me." out ...

Hiya Pink! I'm really sorry it took so long. Hectic life stuff--friend's really sick, been having to get my guy ready to go on deployment...fortunately that's over, so here I ...

Hiya Inkwell! You know, I never seemed to mention how much I love your avatar. Brian is totally the best thing since pancakes. So, anyway, on to the review. I ...