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Re: No Way Out Prologue
Hey there, I am here to leave a review so be prepared! Firstly, I really enjoyed this prologue and I think it has set out the possibility for a great ...
Aug 22, 2013 -
Re: It's Raining Men
Hey there, am here to leave a review! This is a really lovely short piece and the imagery is beautiful. You have managed to create a whole story in just ...
Aug 22, 2013 -
Re: Dream and Reality: Chapter 1, Part 1
Hey Valkyrie here to leave a review! This looks to be like a promising story but it seems a bit all over the place at the moment. In terms of ...
Aug 22, 2013 -
Re: Crystal Clear - Chapter 2
Hello! Valkyrie here to review your piece. The start of this chapter is really nice. I think you have made the right choice in where to start this chapter as ...
Aug 22, 2013 -
Re: One Match
It's me again! Here to leave another review. I really enjoyed this piece as well. There is so much to this story in such a small bit of writing. I ...
Aug 20, 2013 -
Re: One Last Time
Wow. This has left me a little speechless I must admit. I did love this story so I am here to leave a review! :) Firstly, lets attack the grammar. ...
Aug 15, 2013 -
Re: The Biting Game: Alice's Story.
Hey, Valkyrie here to drop a review! First off, I really enjoyed this little zombie-styled piece. I loved that the story is told through the eyes of the young girl. ...
Aug 15, 2013 -
Re: Romancing The Devil: Chapter Three
Its me again for another review! I love this update to the story and it seems a little longer then previous ones, no? I like that a lot by the ...
Jul 19, 2013 -
Re: The Realistic Ruins
Hey there! I really like this short little piece even though I would have loved to see you expand on it more. The simplicity of this makes ever word more ...
Jul 19, 2013 -
Re: Burning Your Rocks
This is an outstanding piece of work! The amount of detail here is amazing. Considering it is a short story I am really impressed by the amount of description you ...
Jul 19, 2013 -
Re: Crystal Blue Eyes - Prologue
This is a really nice introduction. You have given us a nice little teaser of the story to come as well as a bit of information on the seemingly two ...
Jul 18, 2013 -
Re: Amethyst Night - The Secrets of Nightingale Academy - Chapter 1
Hey there I am back again! First off this is a great beginning to what I am sure will be an epic tale! Your description has been kept at a ...
Jul 17, 2013 -
Re: Amethyst Night - The Secrets of Nightingale Academy - Prologue
This is a great prologue! You have given us a nice little taste of what we can expect for this story in terms of your description style, which I love ...
Jul 16, 2013
