Valentine

Valentine Hello Kanen. I'm here on the behalf of your post in my WRFF. I hope you find this helpful. Here it goes. Dracon Renoir hit the rough, dusty ground ...

Valentine Hello Pike. I will be doing this review, and I hope you like the feedback you get as well as find it useful/ Life, such a meaningless thing. (That ...

Valentine Hello Stori. I am here to review your piece. PM me if you have any questions. I hope this helps. Wolves have little concept of "I." So forgive us ...

Valentine Hello Pink Angel. I will complete this review for you. Let me know if you have any question. I hope this helps. That silly nickname falling off his perfect ...

As the wet ground crumbles beneath his feet He carries a container of food For his dear friend. His mind is stuck on Santiago's helplessness, Anything but hopelessness. The two ...

Valentine The thing I like most about this poem is that it doesn't take the view of most romantic writing, and talk about bliss and perfect love. This is accurate ...

Valentine I am sad to say that I have no idea what this means. It was written well, flowed, and rhymed, what is was very confusing. There is a line ...

Valentine Hmmmm...this made me think. It all happened very fast, from the scenery, to her past, to her future, to the death. I like they style I guess. The one ...

Valentine This poem captures the way of the world very well. The world is dark, and full of this immorality. This is the best poem I've read so far because ...

Valentine Nice name. The whole poem seems pretty creepy. I fell like I've heard the somewhere, maybe it's the cliche of the dead corpse bride. The one thing I don't ...

Valentine Since this in non-fiction, I assume this is true about you. I am puzzled as to why you put his on, showing your true inner self to complete strangers ...

Valentine This dream seems to be a nightmare. The writing was as simple as could be. Not very much description at all, but it caught the perspective perfectly of a ...

Valentine It seems to me that you are not very familiar with swords. You poem suggests that one can "cleave" somebody with a "thrust." That is not possible. Besides that, ...

Valentine This leaves me thinking quietly. I wonder why this in historical fiction. This is much more real than fiction. I confused as to why you wrote this. Was it ...

Valentine The one think I think people mistake about poetry is the rules. They think things have to be specifically written certain ways. No, that's wrong. Unless you're trying to ...