Valentine

I didn't read what the other people said, so sorry if I repeat some things. I am here as requested. At first I was annoyed as nothing seemed to be ...

Here as requested: with arts of ink This does not make sense to me that ripe and tear "ripe" should be rip I think. Overall I liked the poem. I ...

Hmmmmmm. I am not going to add too many comments because the reviewers before gave you sufficient advice. The only thing i have to say is.....uh.....you need to put more ...

---- Your bloody Valentine is here for a review !---- Okay, I am going to try to make this as awesome as possible, but bare with me. First off let ...

Hey, it's your bloody Valentine , here for a review. I am actually really mad because I got really far into this review, and then somebody clicked out of it ...

Sorry I am sooooooo late. I forgot to check my forum thing: It seems that peopel have beaten me to the review,but after reading it I have one thing to ...

Greetings Hippie! I am here at last! I am going to break my review into three subjects. Characters, Plot, and Grammar. Hopefully you will find this helpful because you have ...

Here I am!.....Rock you like a hurricane!(reference to song) Okay, lets do this thing. Well, for one thing, this a especially short chapter. Moving on, in the first line or ...

Hello Skins. Happy i could do I review for you. I'm at school right now, so I don't have time to rad chapter one, but I will later if I ...

Here I am at last1 Sorry it took so long... I must say, I really like this. :D Good job! The plot was original, and was the point of view. ...

Here as requested. Sorry it took so long. I forgot about my wrff after nobody posted in it for like two weeks. I don't have to much to critique after ...

Hello Hippie. I am here at your service. So glad that I could help review this and I hope this helps some. Please remember that everything I say is advice, ...

Hey Natibabes! Here to review your poem. Hope you find this helpful. I wrote of a world, a world where the wind whispers melodies of old A world where treasure, ...

Hey-Here as requested. The first thing I noticed was that it was thick. That sounds weird, but while i was reading it, it felt like i was trying to walk ...

Valentine Hello Foxfire. I am here on the behalf of your post in my WRFF. I hope you find this useful. Here it goes. The moon fell silently passed the ...