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Hey, how's life? First time reading your work and genre so the best of luck that it's good. :D First things first. Your first paragraph is descriptive, which i really ...

First thing firsts...Good points, then I'll get on to the improvements. 1) The introduction is very unique "When I woke up this morning and realised I was the same person ...

Oh, my gosh. That is by far the best prologue I have ever read. The world you created is beyond cool. It is just wow. The story is original and ...

Hey, awesome story. I loved how much detail you put into such a short bit. I am a fan of how you created your character, and how you wrote about ...

Hi, so amazing story so i'll just jump right in. I love your first bit so much. "What if we just pretend my rose let’s just try, “the voice behind ...

Hey, so before i say anything amazing plot line and i really want to read more of this. It's a good plot line and the actual story is extremely good. ...

...Oh...My...GOSH! OK that is by far the best piece of work i have ever read. it had suspense, adventure and an amazing cliff hanger at the end i might add. ...

hey, first of all, thank you :D i loved this as it was about elementary. (Sherlock.) OK, so good points : It sounded like Sherlock, simple as, the way you ...

This is a short review, so I'll get straight to it. Amazing piece of work, loved it. So even though I have never been in love, I felt the characters ...

Hi, first of all AMAZING! This is an amaazing piece, i can't wait to read more. Now i'll do posatives first because there are a lot of them. They aren't ...

Hey, first of all amazing work. There's not a lot too improve to be honest. Second of all I think although it is amazing it needs a bit more detail. ...

Hey, first of all amazing work. There's not a lot too improve to be honest. Second of all I think although it is amazing it needs a bit more detail. ...