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Re: The Secret Service page #2
Hello! Uni here for a review! To start off there are some grammar errors: 1) "My family waiting for me at home is just as hungry as the next in ...
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Re: Awe
This is very interesting! I would be very happy if you made more... You should make it a big story... It would make a really good series, it doesn't have ...
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Re: Part 4 - The Final Adage
Uni here for a short review! Hahahahaha! I just love this every single one of the parts of this that I read! I love how everything she learns go straight ...
Jun 20, 2014 -
Re: The Pirate Queen: Chapter 12
Uni here for a short review! I love this so far! it has a very interesting plot and the characters have there own kind of style, I like it! Great ...
Jun 20, 2014 -
Re: Falling Deep- Chapter Two
THIS IS AWESOME!!!AND I MEAN AWESOME!!!! I thought I was actually reading a published novel and I tried to keep scrolling, but then i realized that it wasn't! OH MY ...
Jun 19, 2014 -
Re: Imaginary Conversations #1
I like this! It is very interesting and kind of Book Thiefy... I dunno. It is kind of hard to explain this. My mind is saying, "What did I just ...
Jun 19, 2014 -
Re: Lost Magic. Chapter 9
Uni here for a review! :D SO I love this so far and it is very interesting and captivating. I love where this is going and the plot line is ...
Jun 19, 2014 -
Re: Smile
I LOVE THIS! It is so descriptive and interesting... And it is so captive! When I was looking at the title I was like, I am not going to like ...
Jun 19, 2014 -
Re: The Battle. Chatper 3
Hello! Unique here for a review! To start off, I would like to say that I already liked it in the first paragraph... It was very interesting. I just want ...
Jun 19, 2014 -
Re: FrostBite chapter 1
Unique for a review! I like this a lot! Before I get going on all the stuff I like, I am going to get into the easy problems to fix. ...
Jun 19, 2014 -
Re: Dawn of the Daughter of God-Chapter three
Hello there! Uni here for a review! So to start off, I really like this and it has a very interesting plot line, and if I am not mistaken, I ...
Jun 19, 2014 -
Re: Midnight waltz
Hello! Unique here for a review! :D I love that this is full of description and imagery, and it helps the reader feel more involved. For me, it made me ...
Jun 19, 2014 -
Re: Part 3 - Misplaced Trust
LOL! This is funny! But it is also sad.... I noticed a few grammatical errors in here: 1) "Soaked the bone now" I believe you meant to say, "Soaked to ...
Jun 19, 2014 -
Re: Tides--Chapter 4, Red
Wow! This has an amazing plot line! I would love to hear more! The only thing I would have to say is that I think that the place where he ...
Jun 19, 2014 -
Re: I'll Take My Vitamin D in a Supplement, Thanks
Hahahaha! Summertime sadness, I got that summertime, summertime, sadness! I feel like that song fits the description of my life right at this moment and your poem. But it is ...
Jun 19, 2014
