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  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Life:a dream or real?

    ~Uni here for a review! This was so well done, bravo! The meaning behind it was so well played out and balanced! I'm not exactly a poet, but I do ...

    May 6, 2015
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: If the Dead Could Talk

    ~Uni here! So this was soooo much fun to read! It was very interesting, and captured my attention closely. I mostly understand this from a relateble point of view, because ...

    May 6, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Skin Deep

    Uni here for a review! I love this som much, it is so full of emotion and truthfulness. I have a friend who cuts herself, and thinks of suicide, so ...

    Nov 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Don't venture into woods of night...

    Uni here for an uper duper short review! I loved this! It was so dramatic! Dramatic is my type of, well, anything... I am so over dramatic in my life, ...

    Jul 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Horror Re: The Blood Bond (Chapter One): Quis Ego Sum

    Uni here! I wish not to go into the long and boring facts about grammar, and surely there is a few mistakes in here, I wish only to fangirl. That's ...

    Jul 26, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Stone Cold

    Uni here for a review! SO... This is amazing! This is very good! This is awesome! This is great! That is technically all I am going to say if I ...

    Jul 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: REDACTED

    Uni here for a review! This looks great so far Tigga! I would jsut mention one thing. There is a lot of diaglogue and not a lot of description. Try ...

    Jul 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Love

    Uni here for a review! I am going to dive into grammar: "very ordinary words tumble in little lead marks to paper" This sentence is sort of awkward and choppy, ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Culture Re: Memorial II: The Third Warrior

    Uni here for a review! First thing I noticed was a few grammar mistakes, "that he believe in is memorialized." I do believe that you meant to say, "that he ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: We are all equal. For we live under the same sky.

    I am exactly sure that this is a review, it is more of a discussion topic... Hm... Anyway, I really like this because I feel like all the words in ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: -

    Uni here for a review! I LOVE the figurative language that you put into your writing, it is beautiful! My favorite of all was the rainbow one... Although I do ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Culture Re: Live Album

    Uni here for a review! I couldn't help but notice, that at the beginning of all the stanzas they weren't capitalized. I am not a poet, so this is as ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Of Love Defiant

    Uni here for a review! Just letting you know, I am not a poet, so I will try to avoid getting into the technical stuff. So I will talk about ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, General Re: A tree (2)

    Uni here for a review! I love this! It is very interesting, and the imagery is beautiful! So let's dig into this poem. In the first stanza, when you said, ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: Fanning The Seeds Of Evil

    Uni here for a review! This is beautifully described, and gave me so much imagery I didn't know what to do with it! I know that this may be obvious, ...

    Jun 29, 2014


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