UCntCMee

Hey! I really liked this, somehow. It was definitely cheesy. When I read some of the parts, I couldn't help but laugh. But I still thought it was entertaining. I ...

Wow! That was awesome. No nitpicks from me, either. Keep writing!

I like this. It's a tad short, but it's still good. I know this is hardly a review, but it's all that I have to say. ;) Cool poem. -UCntCMee

Whoa. I'm totally jealous of how good your writing is! That was really good. Keep it up!

Hey there! I really like this poem. It's seems very heart-felt. I don't know much about poetry, but this one seemed alright to me. Good job! -UCntCMee

Great poem! I could imagine being forced under the water. I have to agree that the lack of correct punctuation was distracting, but simple mistakes = an easy fix! -UCntCMee

Hey there! Great song. I have to agree with hockeyfan87's comments. The grammar is taking away from the song's potential. It's very distracting. But anyway, after you fix those, I ...

I love this! I like the second version (the spoiler one?). I think it flows more nicely. I think it portrays what goes (or should go) through a writers mind. ...

I loved it! :) I usually don't like poetry, unless it's somewhat depressing... Anyway! Good job!

Awe! I thought it was cute. Definitely good for a children's book. Good job. :)