TylynRae

@ GryphonFledglin, I totally get where you're coming from with the ellipses. I will admit that I'm absolutely awful at using them, along with punctuation in general. Ha ha =] ...

I shall read this when you spell memorys* correctly. =] I would have read this, because it seems as if you've had a few good reviews. I'm not fantastic at ...

chooses- choices. I didn't get finished reading this, because I became too distracted by everything, the color, the word choices and such. But yeah, before you post, reread things and ...

Heyo there =]. So this piece had a good message, the normal love scene. The execution was a bit sloppy though. The flow was just really choppy and for a ...

I really like this piece a lot and I really wish that this website had some sort of recorder so then we could hear how it sounds. The lyrics are ...

Great usage of metaphors. I really liked this piece a lot. Keep it up =]

You're featured now =]]

I didn't do too much reviewing before I had written that piece. I was new to YWS then and its only been two weeks or so now since I first ...

They're capitalized for a reason. I combine two sentences with the capitalized words. And as for what is falling. Its the beams =]. A lot of people aren't understanding this ...

Thank you mellophone7. I'm glad you haven't seen one written like this before =]. Its just sort of something I was experimenting with. It is a strange way to write, ...

Thanks for the review =]

Ok, to both people that have reviews. The end words of one sentences open up for the next sentence. For instance, far to much to Bear with me. its actually ...

@ Butterfinger, your review thrilled me =] It made my day and I'm happy that you enjoyed it and understood it the way I had meant it to be. your ...

III liked it =] It was cute and sort of reminded me of On The Brightside by never shout never! It was coot =]

Um. This is an interesting piece to say in the least. I don't know how to critique it to be honest... it's just... odd lol. But it's all good =]