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TylynRae

  • Other » General, General Re: Peanut butter Snickers

    I was wondering when someone would read it! Was questioning my title for a minute lol. I really appreciate the advice and would agree! Still trying to figure out how ...

    Apr 1, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Alone

    Insomnia is my biggest inspiration! I really liked the flow of this piece, it was fairly straight forward. I also think the punctuation and formatting of this piece really helped ...

    Apr 1, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Don McCullin

    Hey! It’s been a while since I’ve done a review so bare with me. You had great use of imagery throughout the poem and I felt like for the most ...

    Mar 31, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Childhood

    Thanks so much! I really appreciate the review! I need to get back in the rhythm when it comes to framing and punctuation and I%u2019ve gotten a few comments that ...

    Mar 31, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Childhood

    Thanks for the input!

    Mar 31, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Childhood

    Thank you for the review! Punctuation isn%u2019t something I%u2019ve focused on lately as most all of what I%u2019ve worked on lately have been scribbled down I the middle of the ...

    Mar 31, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Childhood

    Thank you so much! I try not to get into the fiction non fiction aspect for personal reasons, but am glad when I have readers who can connect and have ...

    Mar 31, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Worst days

    Thank you so much for the review!!!

    Mar 28, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Mania

    Hey, thanks for the review! I%u2019m putting a collection of poems together that focus on mental illness and the struggles that I%u2019ve dealt with. I don%u2019t feel like there%u2019s enough ...

    Mar 27, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Mania

    Thank you for the reviews! I really appreciate it!

    Mar 27, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Mania

    Thanks for the review! I have the habit of waking up in the middle of the night with random words or phrases in my head. So I've been trying to ...

    Mar 27, 2019
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: So I'll Let Them Shout

    Hey! I really liked the poem, but I feel like the capitalization distracts from the overall message. The font reminds me of that spongebob meme where he's doing the chicken ...

    Mar 26, 2019
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: So I'll Let Them Shout

    Hey! I really liked the poem, but I feel like the capitalization distracts from the overall message. The font reminds me of that spongebob meme where he's doing the chicken ...

    Mar 26, 2019
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: So I'll Let Them Shout

    Hey! I really liked the poem, but I feel like the capitalization distracts from the overall message. The font reminds me of that spongebob meme where he's doing the chicken ...

    Mar 26, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Untitled

    Thanks so much for the review! I wrote this on a sticky note at work, and admit that format hasn't been my strong suit as of late. I appreciate the ...

    Mar 26, 2019


Wise men talk because they have something to say; fools, because they have to say something.
— Plato