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Re: Peanut butter Snickers
I was wondering when someone would read it! Was questioning my title for a minute lol. I really appreciate the advice and would agree! Still trying to figure out how ...
Apr 1, 2019 -
Re: Alone
Insomnia is my biggest inspiration! I really liked the flow of this piece, it was fairly straight forward. I also think the punctuation and formatting of this piece really helped ...
Apr 1, 2019 -
Re: Don McCullin
Hey! It’s been a while since I’ve done a review so bare with me. You had great use of imagery throughout the poem and I felt like for the most ...
Mar 31, 2019 -
Re: Childhood
Thanks so much! I really appreciate the review! I need to get back in the rhythm when it comes to framing and punctuation and I%u2019ve gotten a few comments that ...
Mar 31, 2019 -
Re: Childhood
Thanks for the input!
Mar 31, 2019 -
Re: Childhood
Thank you for the review! Punctuation isn%u2019t something I%u2019ve focused on lately as most all of what I%u2019ve worked on lately have been scribbled down I the middle of the ...
Mar 31, 2019 -
Re: Childhood
Thank you so much! I try not to get into the fiction non fiction aspect for personal reasons, but am glad when I have readers who can connect and have ...
Mar 31, 2019 -
Re: Worst days
Thank you so much for the review!!!
Mar 28, 2019 -
Re: Mania
Hey, thanks for the review! I%u2019m putting a collection of poems together that focus on mental illness and the struggles that I%u2019ve dealt with. I don%u2019t feel like there%u2019s enough ...
Mar 27, 2019 -
Re: Mania
Thank you for the reviews! I really appreciate it!
Mar 27, 2019 -
Re: Mania
Thanks for the review! I have the habit of waking up in the middle of the night with random words or phrases in my head. So I've been trying to ...
Mar 27, 2019 -
Re: So I'll Let Them Shout
Hey! I really liked the poem, but I feel like the capitalization distracts from the overall message. The font reminds me of that spongebob meme where he's doing the chicken ...
Mar 26, 2019 -
Re: So I'll Let Them Shout
Hey! I really liked the poem, but I feel like the capitalization distracts from the overall message. The font reminds me of that spongebob meme where he's doing the chicken ...
Mar 26, 2019 -
Re: So I'll Let Them Shout
Hey! I really liked the poem, but I feel like the capitalization distracts from the overall message. The font reminds me of that spongebob meme where he's doing the chicken ...
Mar 26, 2019 -
Re: Untitled
Thanks so much for the review! I wrote this on a sticky note at work, and admit that format hasn't been my strong suit as of late. I appreciate the ...
Mar 26, 2019
