TylynRae

Holy... This is really good =]. I like this piece a lot. It's easy to read and I like the way that you formatted it. It's Nice..... I don't know ...

I like this piece =] It has substance to it and the writing style in general is spectacular. I don't know how to word it... but it gives me this ...

Okays, I really like this piece, but there is only one little thing that I see that bothers me a little. When you explain what life is about for different ...

This piece means a lot to me... I just dealt with a similar situation in the past few months. I dated a guy for two and a half years... and ...

... I don't know what to say to this... I read it twice actually, trying to figure out my view, whether I want to be angry or... I don't even ...

I like this a lot. It's truthful and since it's in letter form, it feels right for it to be written the way that it is. So simple and truthful. ...

Okay, I really liked this story first off. It was definitely interesting but I wish it was longer! It leaves you hanging, which is good but it sucks sometimes when ...

I really like the third line, it flows really well into the next line and I just really like how dramatic it makes the whole thing. But it's a really ...

Oh my gosh... I'm really at a loss for words. This piece is so simple, so straight edge, but it really just... I don't know what to say! I picture ...

I like this a lot. I wasn't quite sure what you meant, if your love Was your writing or if it was just another love. Which I don't know if ...

I cannot believe that a thirteen year old wrote this! Its deep and clearly just amazing. If I were to change anything, I'd change the main characters age a little. ...

I think the concept of the story is great and I really like the part about Elliot. But there are a few aspects that I'm not absolutely sold on. One ...