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I like the bit about Princess Layer :lol: but you really must add punctuation, capitals, put this out more clearer and spellcheck it. Otherwise people critiquing this are gonna come ...

Coo! Chilling! I haven't read the other reviews, so scuse me if I repeat what others have said. His voice was smooth as it escaped from his lips. That sentance ...

Very good! I know that seems to be my standard comment, but it is good. The whole story is well written, and your style is very easy to read. The ...

This was great! The ending was very well written, and the last sentances: “You won’t take me,” he whispered, and a single tear ran down his face as he pulled ...

I thought that this was good. :) It has a lot behind it, and the words you use are effective: Without you, I’m lost Treading on dark, rocky paths Stumbling ...

Another great poem, Goldie! There's strong rhythym here, and easy rhyming - things I always find difficult. :) You sit for an hour. No words come. Not one. The life ...

Woo! Wasn't expecting her to die . Is there anything that comes before this that I should read, or does it stand by itself? If its just by itself, I ...

I thought it was good. That might be because I'm just a boring teen, Rei. :wink: I am doomed, you know that too well. I've hidden so much that I ...

Yeah, the revised version is better. I think this is a very good poem. One or two lines didn't run quite right; there were different numbers of syllables in some ...

Hi again! This one's not quite as funny, but still...we can't always expect a height of wit, can we? Its still very well written, though! :) And I'm interested in ...

Hee hee! Very funny! I ran down the hallway and down the steep stairs, and in my hurry, I carelessly let gravity take care of my descent. That is to ...

Aye Carumba! Funny=understatement. :lol: I liked the bit with Gandalf best. :wink: -ShadowTwit

Rather disrepectful and irreverant, don't you think, Ofour? There is no need to question now, For all answers lie in me. I mean, dosn't that shout "untrue" aloud to the ...

The plot thickens! A few things: Princess Amariah lit a few aroma therapy candles. "Aromatherapy" is one word "No, he doesn't know about Julius. He didn't even want a fourth ...

This looks interesting, and you've done a good job at setting the scene for what's going to happen. I don't think there are any mistakes, but a few things I ...