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I like this. Nerds and dorks rule! I loved being thirteen best of all, and I think I'm still in a little world of my own, even though I'm not ...

This is getting deeper and deeper... And, yep, I agree with Sworddance about the semi-colons (and the glowing praise! :wink:) - you need to add a few more in, maureen. ...

Ulp. *swallows, but gives it up and promptly makes use of handy barfing bag* Romantic poetry = 144. You need to add capitals here, and...there doesn't seem to be much ...

Romance...romance makes me...makes me...*hurridley runs outside and vomits* *comes back inside* Sorry about that. Romantic poetry just doesn't do anything for me, but I must say that I liked the ...

NOW what's Jamie gonna do?? Where's she gonna go, or is she just speaking figuritively out of the depths of her despair? Good writing, and thank you for toning down ...

Lummee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:!: :!: :?: :!: :!:

Very deep and thoughtful. Not too sure I like the subject matter - there's so much of it, here on YWS, and out there in the real world, if I'm ...

This is so, so depressing. It's so well written, and that makes it worse, because it makes it too real. So:..... :) :( It's very emotional, and introspective as well. ...

This confirms what I've always suspected without any research, and going completely by a picture I saw of him once: Oscar Wilde was 144. That is, he was drop-dead gross. ...

But it isn't fine on here! Look at it when it's on here, and edit it accordingly! (duh, duh, duh, duh, duh...) Sorry to keep on nagging, but you've gotta ...

Good. Nice and thought provoking. One thing: You're inner child has spoken. That needs to be "your". That apart: great! -Twit

I like this a lot! The theme of insanity is one I like, and this went very well, as far as I can judge. On the other hand, you shouldn't ...

Where does this lead up to? Is it based on the books or the film? I haven't seen the film . . . Okay, you need to space this out ...

This. Is. Totally. AMAZING!!! Seriously, Gyr, you need to get this published. It's great! I don't think there's any mistakes/grammer/typos in here, and anyway if there are, someone else can ...

Good beginning! You didn't always space out your dialogue properally, though. How will the story carry on, I wonder? “Don’t worry! I like them. That one is brown,” the prince ...