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They're depressing. :roll: There's one called "My Sister's Keeper" which is about a girl who sues her parents, because they're taking bone marrow and things from her to keep her ...

Nice. :) The title made me think of Davy Jones and Tia Dalma, but I guess that's irrelevant. :roll: My only quibble is this: A million brilliant sparkles glare red ...

It was kind of funny. :) Like in a "lol" type way. Genie: YOU had three wishes, not Dan. You tell your little Danny boy if he wants his wishes, ...

Dynamoooooo.... Death in the Sea of Lost Souls? It would be a waste of time and effort, quite apart from anything else. This was very good, Crysi! No mistakes or ...

Erm... Deep. Really deep. Actually, it was so deep, I didn't understand a word of it. :roll: No, that's too harsh. If it had a good tune, then I'd like ...

Very nice! :D I can imagine this as a song of some sorts. Echo to Elfie up there, and some other stuff: Summer sang And the wind did too It ...

Hm, interesting. :) I haven't read any other chapters of this, so forgive me if I don't get this right. This is a blog entry by a guy named Austin ...

The gods decide to bless these children of heroes and they live happily ever after. :shock: Uh-uh. Nope. Nix it. Kaput. It's... not good. To be mild. Your grammer needs ...

Sa, 'twas cute, but it seems to be short fiction to me. Ask a mod to move it to "Other Fiction" or something. :) Otherwise, it was well written, but ...

Really good! :D There was hardly anything to pick out, as all the others have said and praised. :) There was only one thing: I took my book from my ...

Life shall be an abstract entity For whom we live after. We live after life? I think putting "yearn" or something like that might be better. It chooses who to ...

I think the title's fine! :) What I would considerr changing is the line: Suddenly I remember her— She’s waiting fir me there, With a smile on her face And ...

I liked it as a serious poem -- not a funny one. I liked the repetition of it, but the last stanza started to get annoying with the "but... but... ...

Amazing! This must be good, if Brad didn't say anything crushing! :) It was interesting, and a funny subject. I'm not sure if there was supposed to be a special ...

Spelling right would be a start, but as you haven't done that, I'm afraid I have to echo everyone else. As Gingie said, Brad is always uber-blighting, but on this ...